T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、自然な英語表現に改善し、冗長な部分を減らすことが必要です。例えば、「I always wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable for exercising and fit well into my daily routine.」のように簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I always wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable for exercising and fit well into my daily routine.

建議: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I buy T-shirts about once a week because there are many T-shirt shops and online stores in Japan, offering designs that I like.」のように、文を整理し、具体的な理由を明確に述べると良いです。

範例: I buy T-shirts about once a week because there are many T-shirt shops and online stores in Japan, offering designs that I like.

建議: 内容が少し曖昧で、文法的にも改善が必要です。例えば、「In my opinion, T-shirts are quite fashionable for people of all ages in my country. Recently, more people around 50 years old have started buying T-shirts.」のように、具体的で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: In my opinion, T-shirts are quite fashionable for people of all ages in my country. Recently, more people around 50 years old have started buying T-shirts.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「Yes, I often wore T-shirts when I was a kid because I started playing football at six years old and needed comfortable clothes.」のように過去形を使い、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts when I was a kid because I started playing football at six years old and needed comfortable clothes.

× I always take on my T-shirts because for me it is very comfortable to exercise or work out, so that's why it's suitable for my daily routine.

✓ I always put on my T-shirts because for me it is very comfortable to exercise or work out, so that's why they're suitable for my daily routine.

The phrase 'take on' is incorrect here; the correct phrasal verb for wearing clothes is 'put on'. Also, 'T-shirts' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they're' instead of 'it's'.

× Yes indeed. I buy some T-shirts maybe once a week because in Japan there are a lot of T-shirt shop and online as well, so it is very good design for me.

✓ Yes indeed. I buy some T-shirts maybe once a week because in Japan there are a lot of T-shirt shops and online as well, so they have very good designs for me.

The noun 'shop' should be plural 'shops' to agree with 'a lot of'. Also, 'it is very good design' is incorrect; 'they have very good designs' correctly refers to multiple designs available.

× In my opinion, it is quite fashionable for all the people to wear T-shirts and nowadays an increasing number of people aged about 50 years old is getting a comment to buy T-shirts.

✓ In my opinion, it is quite fashionable for all people to wear T-shirts and nowadays an increasing number of people aged about 50 years old are buying T-shirts.

The phrase 'an increasing number of people ... is getting a comment to buy' is incorrect. 'An increasing number of people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are buying'. Also, 'getting a comment to buy' is unclear and incorrect; 'are buying' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I often wear AT shirt owning to the fact that when I was, uh, six years old, I started to play football, so I need to wear.

✓ Yes, I often wore a T-shirt because when I was, uh, six years old, I started to play football, so I needed to wear one.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in past tense: 'wear' to 'wore' and 'need' to 'needed'. Also, 'AT shirt' seems to be a typo and should be 'a T-shirt'. The phrase 'owning to the fact' is awkward; 'because' is clearer. Finally, 'wear' needs an object, so 'one' is added.