T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question first, then give clear reasons with correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'looks myself immigrant'.

範例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are very comfortable. Also, I think T-shirts look stylish and suit my young age well.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear, direct answer and support it with specific reasons using linking words.

範例: I often buy T-shirts when I have enough money because they fit me well. Moreover, I feel elegant and comfortable when I wear them.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammar errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and avoid unclear phrases like 'must be bitter low'.

範例: Many older people in my country like to wear T-shirts because they think it makes them look stylish and younger. For example, my uncle often wears T-shirts.

建議: Your answer has grammar mistakes and is a bit unclear. Try to answer directly and use correct past tense. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'at that moment'.

範例: I don't remember if I wore T-shirts when I was very young, but I started wearing them when I was in grade 6. My mother gave me some stylish T-shirts at that time.

× I usually buy AT shirt almost everyday in my daily life because T-shirt is much more comfortable and I think it's very classy compared to formal shirts.

✓ I usually buy a T-shirt almost every day in my daily life because T-shirts are much more comfortable and I think they're very classy compared to formal shirts.

The word 'shirt' should be singular with an article 'a' when referring to one item. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning 'each day'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'.

× Because as I am young and I prefer to wear T-shirt because it suits me and looks myself immigrant.

✓ Because I am young, I prefer to wear T-shirts because they suit me and look good on me.

The phrase 'looks myself immigrant' is incorrect and unclear. It should be replaced with 'look good on me' to express appearance. Also, 'Because as' is redundant; 'Because' or 'As' alone is sufficient. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match general preference.

× It depends. When I have enough money on my pocket at the time, I prefer to purchase new T-shirt.

✓ It depends. When I have enough money in my pocket, I prefer to purchase new T-shirts.

The phrase 'on my pocket' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in my pocket'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally.

× As I mentioned earlier, T-shirt is my favorite clothes because it suits me well and when I wear T-shirt I look very elegant and that's all.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, T-shirts are my favorite clothes because they suit me well, and when I wear T-shirts, I look very elegant, and that's all.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'clothes' which is plural. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. Pronouns should also agree in number.

× There are many older people in my country who prefer to wear T-shirt because they think they look well and stylish wearing T-shirt and they believe when they wear T-shirt they are is must be bitter low or they look young and for example my uncle usually prefer to wear T-shirt.

✓ There are many older people in my country who prefer to wear T-shirts because they think they look good and stylish wearing T-shirts, and they believe when they wear T-shirts they must be better low or they look young. For example, my uncle usually prefers to wear T-shirts.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Look well' should be 'look good' as 'well' is an adverb and 'good' is an adjective describing appearance. 'They are is must be bitter low' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'must be better low' is still unclear but kept as close as possible. 'My uncle usually prefer' should be 'prefers' to agree with singular subject.

× I didn't remember yet whether I wore T-shirt or not when I were a kid, but when I grew much older, at the time, when I was in grade 6 at that moment, I wore T-shirt and my mother gift me some stylist T-shirt.

✓ I don't remember yet whether I wore T-shirts or not when I was a kid, but when I grew much older, at that time, when I was in grade 6, I wore T-shirts and my mother gifted me some stylish T-shirts.

'Didn't remember yet' is better as 'don't remember yet' for present relevance. 'When I were a kid' should be 'when I was a kid' for subject-verb agreement. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Gift' should be past tense 'gifted'. 'Stylist' is incorrect adjective; it should be 'stylish'.