T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and keep your answer concise and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct small grammar mistakes like 'filled of' should be 'filled with'.

範例: I often wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and cozy. I especially like green and black colours, and my cupboard is filled with a variety of T-shirts.

建議: Your answer has some grammar errors and lacks coherence. Use correct verb tenses and plural forms, and connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, 'purchased T-shirt every day' is unlikely and should be corrected.

範例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because my father is a shopkeeper who provides me with different T-shirts on various occasions.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using linking words and correcting grammar. Use plural forms correctly and avoid starting sentences with 'But'. Also, provide more specific details or examples to enrich your answer.

範例: There are a variety of T-shirts suitable for everyone. Older people usually prefer light-coloured T-shirts as they suit them better. However, everyone has their own preferences when it comes to choosing shirts or T-shirts.

建議: Your answer is too long and somewhat unclear. Try to answer directly and avoid unnecessary details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'according to my perspective'.

範例: I don't clearly remember wearing T-shirts as a kid, but now I prefer them because they are comfortable. My mother also likes buying T-shirts for me from markets and supermarkets.

× I often wear T-shirt regularly because I love T-shirts because they are very comfortable and cozy so I love the green colour as well as black and my cupboard is filled of a plethora of T-shirts.

✓ I often wear T-shirts regularly because I love T-shirts as they are very comfortable and cozy. I love the green colour as well as black, and my cupboard is filled with a plethora of T-shirts.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to wearing them regularly and in general. Also, 'filled of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'filled with'. This correction ensures proper plural usage and correct preposition use.

× Yes absolutely. I purchased T-shirt every day because I am the daughter of a shopkeeper who always provide T-shirts to me.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I purchase T-shirts every day because I am the daughter of a shopkeeper who always provides T-shirts to me.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking about buying them every day. Also, 'purchased' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'purchase' is appropriate. Additionally, 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'shopkeeper'.

× I purchased T-shirt every day because I am the daughter of a shopkeeper who always provide T-shirts to me.

✓ I purchase T-shirts every day because I am the daughter of a shopkeeper who always provides T-shirts to me.

The verb 'provide' must be in third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'shopkeeper'.

× My father is a shopkeeper as well and he loves to buy T-shirt for me on different occasion.

✓ My father is a shopkeeper as well and he loves to buy T-shirts for me on different occasions.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'occasion' should be plural 'occasions' to indicate more than one event.

× There are variety of T-shirts that every individual can wear.

✓ There is a variety of T-shirts that every individual can wear.

The phrase 'a variety' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'variety'.

× But older people should wear light colored T-shirt which suits them.

✓ But older people should wear light colored T-shirts which suit them.

Since 'older people' is plural, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. Also, the relative pronoun 'which' refers to plural 'T-shirts', so the verb should be 'suit' not 'suits'.

× my cupboard is filled of a plethora of T-shirts.

✓ my cupboard is filled with a plethora of T-shirts.

The correct preposition after 'filled' is 'with', not 'of'.

× I purchased T-shirt every day because I am the daughter of a shopkeeper who always provide T-shirts to me.

✓ I purchase T-shirts every day because I am the daughter of a shopkeeper who always provides T-shirts to me.

The action of buying T-shirts every day is habitual, so present tense 'purchase' is appropriate instead of past tense 'purchased'.

× But every individual has different perspective.

✓ But every individual has a different perspective.

The noun 'perspective' is singular and requires the article 'a' before it.

× my cupboard is filled of a plethora of T-shirts.

✓ my cupboard is filled with a plethora of T-shirts.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect after 'filled'; the correct preposition is 'with'.

× my mother is a fond of T-shirt and always purchase some of them for me also.

✓ my mother is fond of T-shirts and always purchases some of them for me as well.

The phrase 'is a fond of' is incorrect; it should be 'is fond of'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring generally. The verb 'purchase' should be 'purchases' to agree with singular subject 'mother'. 'Also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end.