T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'a'. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with clear sentences. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: I usually wear T-shirts daily because they are very comfortable. At work, I prefer formal T-shirts, while at home, I like to wear casual ones. During the day, I often choose blue T-shirts as they suit my style.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'Bing a shopaholic person' and 'I found the most as AT shirt'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid filler words and complete your sentences properly.

範例: I am a shopaholic and often buy many clothes, especially T-shirts. When I shop, I choose T-shirts in various colours and with different prints. My favourite colours are white, blue, and black.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and repetition. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to add linking words to improve coherence.

範例: T-shirts worn by older people in my country are usually simple and plain. Senior citizens prefer these styles as they look professional and suit their personality. Therefore, T-shirts for older people are generally not very fashionable.

建議: Your answer has many filler words and unclear phrases like 'I lacked weird T-shirts a lot' and 'I packed vibrant colored T-shirts'. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Be more specific and avoid redundancy.

範例: Definitely, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. I liked wearing vibrant coloured T-shirts such as red, pink, yellow, and orange. These bright colours made me feel happy and reflected my cheerful personality.

× A Usually on daily basis I like to wear T-shirts because I think that it's quite a comfortable for me.

✓ Usually, on a daily basis, I like to wear T-shirts because I think that they are quite comfortable for me.

The phrase 'on daily basis' is missing the article 'a' and the sentence incorrectly uses 'it's quite a comfortable' instead of 'they are quite comfortable'. 'T-shirts' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and 'comfortable' should not have an article before it.

× I wear different kind of, uh, T-shirts.

✓ I wear different kinds of T-shirts.

The phrase 'different kind of' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of' when referring to multiple types.

× On the, uh, work I wear former T-shirts as well as whenever I am at home.

✓ At work, I wear formal T-shirts as well as whenever I am at home.

The preposition 'on the work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at work'. Also, 'former' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'formal'.

× At daytime, I wear blue T-shirts, which could provide.

✓ During the daytime, I wear blue T-shirts, which I find comfortable.

The phrase 'At daytime' should be 'During the daytime'. The clause 'which could provide' is incomplete and unclear; it needs an object or explanation.

× Bing a shopaholic person.

✓ Being a shopaholic person,

The word 'Bing' is a typo and should be 'Being'. Also, this is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the next sentence.

× I buy a lot of clothes uh, basically most of them I found the most as AT shirt and whenever I go for shopping, I mostly buy T-shirt off for different colours like of pens and graphics.

✓ I buy a lot of clothes. Basically, most of them are T-shirts, and whenever I go shopping, I mostly buy T-shirts in different colours with prints and graphics.

The original sentence is confusing and has multiple errors: 'I found the most as AT shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'most of them are T-shirts'. 'T-shirt off for different colours like of pens and graphics' is unclear and corrected to 'T-shirts in different colours with prints and graphics'.

× Uh, the colour which I like the most is of a white, blue as well as black.

✓ The colours I like the most are white, blue, and black.

'Colour' should be plural 'colours' because multiple colours are listed. The phrase 'is of a white' is incorrect; it should be 'are white'.

× So these are the.

✓ So these are the colours I prefer.

The sentence is incomplete and needs an object to complete the thought.

× Basically the T-shirts which are born by the older people are not much fashionable because as senior citizens like to wear a simple as well as a plain T-shirts which enhance your personality professionally.

✓ Basically, the T-shirts which are worn by older people are not very fashionable because senior citizens like to wear simple and plain T-shirts which enhance their personality professionally.

'Born' should be 'worn'. 'A simple as well as a plain T-shirts' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'simple and plain T-shirts'. 'Your personality' should be 'their personality' to match the subject.

× Apart from this they like to wear just a simple T-shirts.

✓ Apart from this, they like to wear just simple T-shirts.

'A simple T-shirts' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'T-shirts'. It should be 'simple T-shirts' without 'a'.

× When I was kid, I lacked weird T-shirts a lot

✓ When I was a kid, I liked weird T-shirts a lot.

The phrase 'was kid' is missing the article 'a'. The verb 'lacked' is incorrect in context; it should be 'liked'.

× And uh, I think that, uh, when I was a kid at that time, I packed vibrant colored T-shirts like a red, pink, yellow, orange that enhanced my mood as well as my personality too.

✓ And I think that when I was a kid, I wore vibrant coloured T-shirts like red, pink, yellow, and orange that enhanced my mood as well as my personality.

'Packed' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'wore'. The phrase 'like a red, pink, yellow, orange' should be 'like red, pink, yellow, and orange'. The phrase 'at that time' is redundant with 'when I was a kid'.