T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of listing activities separately, you can group them logically and use linking words like 'because' or 'when'. Also, watch for grammar errors such as 'on a weekends' should be 'on weekends' and 'at the home' should be 'at home'.

範例: I occasionally wear T-shirts on weekends or when I'm at home because they are comfortable. Most of the time, I wear formal clothes for work. Additionally, I prefer T-shirts when I go to the gym or attend educational activities.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes that affect clarity, such as 'shoes to my personality' and 'Polish colour'. Try to use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'different shape' and explain your preferences clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I occasionally buy T-shirts because they are comfortable and suit my style. For example, I usually choose cotton T-shirts in pastel colours with different designs because they are casual and suitable for various occasions.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar errors, such as 'there is a no doubt' and 'So do the gossips at the park'. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples.

範例: There is no doubt that T-shirts are very popular among older people in my country. They often wear them on special occasions or when meeting friends at the park. This is because T-shirts are comfortable and practical for them.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammar and vocabulary errors, such as 'when I watch kid' and 'one note T-shirts'. Try to clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. Also, avoid vague statements like 'upgrade my standard' and explain your preferences clearly. Use linking words to connect your sentences logically.

範例: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was a kid. I preferred black and white colours because they suited me well. Whenever I went shopping with my family, I liked to buy plain T-shirts in these colours because they were comfortable and matched my style.

× Well, I occasionally wear T-shirts when I am doing something on a weekends or at the home.

✓ Well, I occasionally wear T-shirts when I am doing something on weekends or at home.

The preposition 'on' is used with days and dates, so 'on weekends' is correct, not 'on a weekends'. Also, 'at home' is the correct phrase without the article 'the'. Using 'the home' is incorrect in this context.

× Most of the time I am at the work.

✓ Most of the time I am at work.

'Work' as a place does not require the definite article 'the'. Saying 'at work' is the correct form, while 'at the work' is incorrect.

× In addition to this, sometimes I go to gym and do the educational activities.

✓ In addition to this, sometimes I go to the gym and do educational activities.

'Gym' as a specific place requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'educational activities' does not need the definite article 'the' unless referring to specific activities previously mentioned.

× At that time I give preference to wear T-shirts.

✓ At that time I prefer to wear T-shirts.

'Give preference to' is a less common and awkward phrase here. The correct expression is 'prefer to wear'. Also, 'give preference to wear' is incorrect usage of prepositions and verb forms.

× Yes, I occasionally buy T-shirts because these are comfortable and shoes to my personality.

✓ Yes, I occasionally buy T-shirts because they are comfortable and suit my personality.

'These' is a demonstrative pronoun but 'they' is more appropriate here referring to T-shirts. Also, 'shoes to my personality' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'suit' to express compatibility.

× For example, when I usually choose from cotton T-shirts in a Polish colour and the different shape because these are outstanding casuals and more suitable for every function.

✓ For example, I usually choose cotton T-shirts in Polish colours and different shapes because these are outstanding casual wear and more suitable for every occasion.

The phrase 'when I usually choose from' is awkward; 'I usually choose' is better. 'Polish colour' should be plural 'Polish colours' if multiple colours are meant. 'The different shape' should be 'different shapes' without 'the'. 'Outstanding casuals' is incorrect; 'casual wear' is the correct term. 'Every function' is better expressed as 'every occasion'.

× Well, there is a no doubt.

✓ Well, there is no doubt.

'A no doubt' is incorrect because 'no' is a determiner that does not require an article. The correct phrase is 'there is no doubt'.

× Old people like to wear T-shirt on the special occasions.

✓ Old people like to wear T-shirts on special occasions.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to general instances. Also, 'the special occasions' should be 'special occasions' without the definite article when speaking generally.

× Sometimes they like to wear T-shirts when they go outside with their friends.

✓ Sometimes they like to wear T-shirts when they go out with their friends.

'Go outside' is less natural in this context; 'go out' is the correct phrasal verb to indicate going somewhere socially.

× So do the gossips at the park.

✓ They also gossip at the park.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'So do the gossips at the park' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper structure.

× They like to wear T-shirts because T-shirts are most comfortable and suitable clothes for them.

✓ They like to wear T-shirts because T-shirts are the most comfortable and suitable clothes for them.

'Most comfortable' requires the definite article 'the' when used as a superlative adjective. Without 'the', the sentence is incorrect.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts when I watch kid.

✓ Yes, I liked to wear T-shirts when I was a kid.

The question is about past habits, so past tense 'liked' and 'was' should be used. Also, 'watch kid' is incorrect; it should be 'was a kid'.

× I like to wear black and white colors because these colors were suitable for me and it upgrade my standard as well.

✓ I liked to wear black and white colours because those colours were suitable for me and they upgraded my standard as well.

'These' should be 'those' when referring to something in the past. 'It' is incorrect when referring to plural 'colours'; 'they' is correct. 'Upgrade' should be past tense 'upgraded' to match the past context.

× Whenever I go for the shopping with my family, I like to buy one note T-shirts of the same color so that I can upgrade my lifestyle and I feel comfortable in these T-shirts.

✓ Whenever I go shopping with my family, I like to buy plain T-shirts of the same colour so that I can upgrade my lifestyle and feel comfortable in these T-shirts.

'Go for the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. 'One note T-shirts' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'plain T-shirts'. Also, 'color' should be 'colour' in Canadian English.