T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "former clothes" instead of "formal clothes" and "in your" which seems incomplete. Try to use correct vocabulary and complete your sentences. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

範例: I wear T-shirts every day, especially at home where I prefer comfortable and cozy clothes. However, at work, I usually wear formal clothes to maintain a professional appearance because I believe it's important to dress appropriately for different settings.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and incomplete sentences, such as "I always read I'm always ready" and "I bought. I bought at least I bought 10 T-shirt." Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use plural forms correctly and complete your sentences.

範例: I own several T-shirts from different brands, and I am always ready to buy more, especially when there are sales. For example, last weekend during Black Friday, I found a great deal at the superstore and bought at least ten T-shirts.

建議: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrasing, such as "recommend to have" and "simpler and tidy comfort." Try to speak more fluently and use clearer expressions. Also, provide more specific details about fashion preferences for older people.

範例: In my country, older people usually prefer simple and comfortable T-shirts. For example, my grandmother always advises me to choose tidy and plain T-shirts for her, especially those made in Canada because of their quality.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors, such as "this this kind of AT shirt" and "We I wear T-shirt." Try to avoid repeating words and use correct sentence structures. Also, clarify your ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, when I was a child, I used to wear various T-shirts. White T-shirts were among my favorites, and I still enjoy wearing them. At school, I usually wore T-shirts paired with long pants.

× I put on T-shirts every day, specially at home.

✓ I put on T-shirts every day, especially at home.

The word 'specially' is used to mean 'for a special purpose', while 'especially' means 'particularly' or 'mainly', which fits better in this context.

× Otherwise I wear comfortable and cozy T-shirts at home because I believe that home is the place where you can relax in your.

✓ Otherwise, I wear comfortable and cozy T-shirts at home because I believe that home is the place where you can relax.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'in your' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'in your' completes the sentence logically and grammatically.

× However, I always read I'm always ready to buy T-shirts, especially if they are on sale.

✓ However, I'm always ready to buy T-shirts, especially if they are on sale.

The phrase 'I always read' is incorrect and seems to be a mistake. Removing it corrects the sentence structure.

× I bought at least I bought 10 T-shirt.

✓ I bought at least 10 T-shirts.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to more than one. Also, the repeated phrase 'I bought' is redundant and should be removed.

× In my country, seniors always, uh, recommend to have uh, simple T-shirts.

✓ In my country, seniors always recommend having simple T-shirts.

The verb 'recommend' is followed by a gerund ('having') rather than an infinitive ('to have'). Also, filler words like 'uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× For instance, my grandmother, she always told me to get the simpler and tidy comfort as well as comfortable T-shirts for her from Canada.

✓ For instance, my grandmother always told me to get simpler and tidier, as well as comfortable, T-shirts for her from Canada.

The comparative forms 'simpler' and 'tidier' should be used without 'the' when comparing. Also, 'tidy comfort' is incorrect; 'tidier' modifies 'T-shirts'. Commas are added for clarity.

× I remember that white T-shirts were one of my favorite colors and still I love to wear this this kind of AT shirt.

✓ I remember that white T-shirts were one of my favorite colors and I still love to wear this kind of T-shirt.

The phrase 'this this kind of AT shirt' contains repetition and 'AT' seems to be a typo. 'T-shirt' should be singular here as it refers to a kind or type.

× We I wear T-shirt at school with the long pants.

✓ I wore T-shirts at school with long pants.

The sentence has a typo 'We I' which should be 'I'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match the context, and 'the long pants' should be 'long pants' without 'the'.