T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce repetition, correct grammar (e.g., "I wear T-shirts every day"), and give a brief reason with a linking word. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "comfortable" instead of "flexible to work").

範例: I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and practical. In my job at a five-star hotel I prefer T-shirts for ease of movement, especially during busy shifts.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases and be more specific about frequency and reasons. Use linking words like "because" or "so" once and give a concrete example of when or why you buy them.

範例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because buying new clothes lifts my mood. For example, I usually buy a new T-shirt when I see a design I like or before a casual event.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "however", "because"). Correct grammar ("some people are", "others are not") and clarify "circumstance" (e.g., occasion, age, income).

範例: It depends on the person. Some older people wear fashionable T-shirts for social outings, while others prefer plain, comfortable styles for home because comfort is their priority.

建議: Be concise and correct past tense ("I wore"). Use linking words like "but" to contrast and give a clear specific detail (e.g., occasions when you wore dresses). Avoid repetitions and simplify phrasing.

範例: Yes, I wore T-shirts a lot as a child because they were comfortable for playing. But sometimes I wore dresses when I wanted to look like a princess for special occasions.

× I think I I wear T-shirts on every day because it is very convenient and it's flexible to work.

✓ I think I wear T-shirts every day because they are very convenient and comfortable for work.

The original has repeated 'I', incorrect adverb placement 'on every day', wrong pronoun/number agreement ('it' for T-shirts), and awkward phrase 'flexible to work'. Use 'every day' (adverb), plural 'they' for T-shirts, and 'comfortable for work' to convey suitability. Suggestions: remove duplicate words, place 'every day' after the verb, match plural noun with plural pronoun, and use appropriate adjective 'comfortable'.

× Actually I work at 5 star so it is good for me.

✓ Actually I work at a five-star hotel, so this is good for me.

Missing article before '5 star' and unclear noun. Use 'a five-star hotel' to specify workplace and 'this' to refer to wearing T-shirts. Also add comma before 'so'. Suggestions: include correct articles and clearer nouns, and spell out numbers in formal speech.

× Yeah, actually I often buy T-shirts because I like to buy new T-shirt because sometimes it makes it makes me feel happy and other feelings.

✓ Yeah, actually I often buy T-shirts because I like buying new ones; sometimes it makes me feel happy and gives me other positive feelings.

Inconsistent verb forms and repetition 'makes it makes'. 'New T-shirt' should be plural or replaced with 'new ones'. Use gerund 'buying' after 'like'. Clarify 'other feelings' to 'other positive feelings'. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use gerunds after 'like', and use pronouns for previously mentioned nouns.

× So I like it.

✓ So I like them.

Pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'T-shirts'. Use 'them' to agree with plural noun. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches antecedent.

× Uh, this is tough question.

✓ Uh, this is a tough question.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'tough question'. English requires articles with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: add 'a' for singular countable nouns.

× It depends on individuals.

✓ It depends on the individual.

'Individuals' is plural but the impersonal phrase typically uses singular 'the individual' or plural 'individuals' with a different structure. 'Depends on the individual' is more natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use fixed expressions appropriately.

× I think some people is very fashionable, why the other others is not fashionable?

✓ I think some people are very fashionable, while others are not.

Subject-verb agreement: plural 'people' requires 'are', not 'is'. 'the other others' is redundant; use 'others'. Also run-on question fixed into statement. Suggestion: match verb number to subject, avoid redundancy, and use conjunctions correctly.

× Because it depends on circumstance and their interest.

✓ Because it depends on the circumstances and their interests.

Use plural 'circumstances' and 'interests' to match general reference. Suggestion: pluralize nouns when speaking generally about varying situations and preferences.

× And some people want to be nice while some people want want more comfort.

✓ And some people want to look nice while others prefer more comfort.

Repetition 'want want' and awkward 'want to be nice'. Use 'look nice' for appearance and 'prefer' for clarity. Replace second 'some people' with 'others' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: avoid repeated words and choose verbs that fit collocations ('look nice', 'prefer comfort').

× Yeah, I think so. I think I almost wear T-shirts because it's too good to activity because child child like to more comfortable and but sometimes I think I wear one piece because I like I want to look like Princess.

✓ Yeah, I think so. I think I almost always wore T-shirts because they were comfortable for activities when I was a child, but sometimes I wore dresses because I wanted to look like a princess.

Tense should be past ('wore') when referring to childhood. 'Almost' should be placed with 'always' for 'almost always'. 'It's too good to activity' is incorrect; use 'comfortable for activities'. Repeated 'child child' removed and plural agreement fixed. 'One piece' is unclear; 'dresses' fits context. 'I like I want to look' should be past 'I wanted to look'. Suggestions: use past tense for past events, correct collocations ('comfortable for activities'), remove repetitions, and choose clearer nouns ('dresses', 'princess').