数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不必要的细节，同时注意时态和语法的正确使用。

範例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers. When I was a child, my parents asked me to remember their phone number, but I found it quite difficult to do so.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因，避免重复和不准确的表达。

範例: I don't think I will use numbers much in my future work because I have never been good at math since primary school.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用简洁的句子表达自己的感受，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: No, I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because it made me feel stressed. Whenever my father asked me to do math, I would get a headache and try to avoid it.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和发音错误较多。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明数字的重要性。

範例: The number three is important to me because there are three people in my family: my mother, my father, and me.

× I was just a six year old child.

✓ I was just a six-year-old child.

这里需要用连字符将复合形容词连接起来，表示“六岁的孩子”。

× My parents asked me to remember their mobile phone number so that I could find them.

✓ My parents asked me to remember their mobile phone number so that I could contact them.

“find them”用法不当，应该用“contact them”表示联系他们。

× Every time, but it is a little bit to hard for me, so I remember for a long time and finally I grab.

✓ Every time, it was a little bit too hard for me, so I couldn't remember for a long time and finally I gave up.

“to hard”应为“too hard”，表示“太难”；“remember for a long time”表达不准确，应为“couldn't remember”；“finally I grab”语法错误，应为“finally I gave up”。

× Well, actually not because I'm not good at math since I was just a primary school student.

✓ Well, actually not because I haven't been good at math since I was just a primary school student.

“since”引导的时间状语从句，主句应使用现在完成时，表示从过去持续到现在的状态。

× So no matter the major or the future work, I will avoid myself to keep touch with the numbers.

✓ So no matter the major or the future work, I will avoid keeping in touch with numbers.

“avoid myself to keep touch”结构错误，avoid后应接动名词形式，且“keep touch”应为“keeping in touch”。

× So in the future I will never use number.

✓ So in the future I will never use numbers.

“number”应为复数形式“numbers”，表示数字的泛指。

× Well, definitely not when I was just a child, I was so scared to study math as well as my father asked me to do some math.

✓ Well, definitely not. When I was just a child, I was so scared to study math, especially when my father asked me to do some math.

句子结构混乱，需拆分为两个句子；“as well as”用法不当，应改为“especially when”。

× I will have a I would have a headache and I will find a lot of reasons to avoid those things.

✓ I would have a headache and I would find a lot of reasons to avoid those things.

描述过去习惯时应使用情态动词“would”，而非将来时“will”。

× Well, actually it is a little bit hard to see because.

✓ Well, actually it is a little bit hard to say because.

“hard to see”用法不当，应为“hard to say”，表示难以表达。

× I'm not so sensible to the numbers, but if I had to see maybe 3 BIC AWS there are thre.

✓ I'm not very sensitive to numbers, but if I had to choose, maybe 3.

“sensible”用错，应为“sensitive”；“had to see”应为“had to choose”；“BIC AWS there are thre”无意义，应删除。

× Person in my family, my mom, my father and me.

✓ There are three people in my family: my mom, my father, and me.

“Person”应为复数“people”，且句子需完整表达。

× I think 3 is most important.

✓ I think 3 is the most important.

比较级表达中需使用定冠词“the”。