数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide a clear reason or example. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I am not very good at remembering numbers, so I use digital apps to help me."

範例: I am not very good at remembering numbers, so I use digital apps to help me store important numbers. This way, I don't have to rely on my memory alone.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing because you first say 'No' but then mention you will use numbers. Make your response clear and concise. Start with a direct answer, then explain with relevant details using linking words for coherence.

範例: No, I don't think I will use numbers in my future work because I am a personal support worker focusing on human interaction and dementia care, which does not require much use of numbers.

建議: Your answer conveys your feelings but has repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use past tense consistently. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Actually, I did not enjoy studying math as a child because my teacher was not very supportive. Moreover, I found it difficult to learn formulas and equations, which made the subject challenging for me.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has some repetition. Make sure to finish your sentences and avoid repeating words. Provide specific examples and explain why these numbers are important to you, using linking words for clarity.

範例: The numbers that are important to me include my birthday, my anniversary, and my parents' birthdays and anniversaries. These dates are special because they remind me of important celebrations and family moments.

× Membering numbers actually use the digital apps to remember the numbers because I often forget numbers and as well as whenever I want to remember I saved in a digital map.

✓ Remembering numbers, I actually use digital apps to remember the numbers because I often forget numbers and whenever I want to remember, I save them in a digital app.

The word 'Membering' is incorrect; the correct gerund form of the verb 'remember' is 'Remembering'. Using the correct '-ing' form is necessary to express the action properly in this context.

× Membering numbers actually use the digital apps to remember the numbers because I often forget numbers and as well as whenever I want to remember I saved in a digital map.

✓ Remembering numbers, I actually use digital apps to remember the numbers because I often forget numbers and whenever I want to remember, I save them in a digital app.

The phrase 'saved in a digital map' is incorrect because 'map' is not the intended word; it should be 'app'. Also, the preposition 'in' is appropriate here, but the noun was wrong. Correcting to 'save them in a digital app' clarifies the meaning.

× No, I don't think so. I will use number in my future work because right now I'm working as a personal support worker.

✓ No, I don't think so. I will use numbers in my future work because right now I'm working as a personal support worker.

The word 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple numbers in general. Using the plural form is necessary to match the context.

× And I'm also working in dementia care, so there is no need to use number or it's not in my future.

✓ And I'm also working in dementia care, so there is no need to use numbers or it's not in my future.

Again, 'number' should be plural 'numbers' to correctly refer to multiple numbers. This maintains consistency and clarity.

× Actually, not at all. A math math Math was a very very difficult subject for me as a child because my teacher was not supportive and uh, I find it difficult when I have to learn the formulas and equation, so I find it difficult most of the time.

✓ Actually, not at all. Math was a very, very difficult subject for me as a child because my teacher was not supportive and, uh, I found it difficult when I had to learn the formulas and equations, so I found it difficult most of the time.

The phrase 'A math math Math' is incorrect; 'Math' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'equation' should be plural 'equations' to match 'formulas' and indicate multiple items. Correct quantifiers and plural forms improve grammatical accuracy.

× Actually, not at all. A math math Math was a very very difficult subject for me as a child because my teacher was not supportive and uh, I find it difficult when I have to learn the formulas and equation, so I find it difficult most of the time.

✓ Actually, not at all. Math was a very, very difficult subject for me as a child because my teacher was not supportive and, uh, I found it difficult when I had to learn the formulas and equations, so I found it difficult most of the time.

Since the speaker is referring to past experiences as a child, the verbs should be in the past tense: 'find' changes to 'found' and 'have' changes to 'had' to maintain tense consistency.

× The numbers are especially important for me such as my birthday date are my anniversary date and my parents birthday and anniversary dates.

✓ The numbers especially important to me are my birthday date, my anniversary date, and my parents' birthday and anniversary dates.

The phrase 'my birthday date are my anniversary date' is incorrect because 'date' is singular but connected with 'are' which is plural. Also, 'parents' should have an apostrophe to show possession. Correcting singular/plural agreement and possessive form improves clarity.

× The numbers are especially important for me such as my birthday date are my anniversary date and my parents birthday and anniversary dates.

✓ The numbers are especially important to me, such as my birthday date, my anniversary date, and my parents' birthday and anniversary dates.

The preposition 'for' should be 'to' in the phrase 'important to me' to correctly express the relationship. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× So these these dates and numbers are very important to me Whenever I feel like I have to celebrate I usually.

✓ So these dates and numbers are very important to me. Whenever I feel like I have to celebrate, I usually do so.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb in the second part. Adding 'do so' completes the sentence and improves sentence structure. Also, removing the repeated word 'these' and adding punctuation enhances clarity.