数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: თქვენი პასუხი ბუნებრივია, მაგრამ ზოგჯერ სიტყვები მეორდება და პასუხი შეიძლება იყოს უფრო კონციზური. სცადეთ გამოიყენოთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი უფრო ლოგიკური და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი გახდეს.

範例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers, so I usually rely on digital tools and notes. For example, I write down important numbers like passwords or dates on paper. When solving math problems, I always jot down the information to help me find the solution myself.

建議: თქვენი პასუხი კარგად არის სტრუქტურირებული, მაგრამ შეგიძლიათ გამოიყენოთ უფრო მრავალფეროვანი ლექსიკა და შეავსოთ პასუხი დამატებითი დეტალებით, რათა ის უფრო საინტერესო და ინფორმატიული გახდეს.

範例: As a lawyer, I occasionally use numbers, especially when dealing with financial documents and contracts. Although I rely on digital tools for calculations, my main tasks involve writing and researching legal documents, so numbers are not a daily priority for me.

建議: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს გრამატიკულ და ლექსიკურ შეცდომებს, რაც აზრის გადმოცემას ართულებს. გირჩევთ ყურადღება მიაქციოთ წარსულის ფორმების სწორ გამოყენებას და უფრო კონკრეტული მაგალითების მოყვანას.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I had an excellent teacher who explained information quickly and clearly. His interesting lessons helped me become more accurate and develop problem-solving skills, which are useful in many areas of life.

建議: თქვენი პასუხი ბუნებრივია, მაგრამ შეგიძლიათ უფრო კონკრეტულად და დეტალურად აღწეროთ, რატომ არის ეს რიცხვები მნიშვნელოვანი და გამოიყენოთ ნაკლები სიტყვიერი გამოტოვება.

範例: Some numbers are important to me because they relate to special occasions. For instance, the number 8 is significant as it is my birth date. I also remember the birthdays of my friends and family so I can send them my best wishes on their special days.

× I am not very good at remembering information and I find it difficult to memorize such abstract information.

✓ I am not very good at remembering information and I find it difficult to memorize such abstract information.

This sentence is correct; the use of 'remembering' and 'memorize' is appropriate here.

× For instance, when I need to remember some numbers, dates and passwords, I usually rely on digital tools and notes.

✓ For instance, when I need to remember some numbers, dates, and passwords, I usually rely on digital tools and notes.

A comma is needed before 'and' in a list for clarity, but the singular/plural usage is correct.

× I also use paper.

✓ I also use paper.

This sentence is correct; 'paper' is uncountable here and used appropriately.

× When I need to solve some math problem, I always write down this information and make solution by my own.

✓ When I need to solve some math problems, I always write down this information and make the solution by myself.

'Some math problem' should be plural 'some math problems' to match general usage. 'Make solution' is incorrect; it should be 'make the solution'. 'By my own' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'by myself'.

× As a lawyer, I occasionally use number in my work, especially when handling financial documents and contracts.

✓ As a lawyer, I occasionally use numbers in my work, especially when handling financial documents and contracts.

'Number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple instances.

× At this point, I always use the help from digital tools and counter, but my main focus on work is writing and research legal documents, so numbers are not an essential part of my daily tasks.

✓ At this point, I always use help from digital tools and counters, but my main focus at work is writing and researching legal documents, so numbers are not an essential part of my daily tasks.

'Use the help from' should be 'use help from' without 'the'. 'Counter' should be plural 'counters' if referring to devices or tools. 'My main focus on work' should be 'my main focus at work'. 'Research legal documents' should be 'researching legal documents' to maintain parallel structure.

× Yes, I enjoy studying mass when I was a child because I have an excellent teacher who he was information very quickly and easy and made very interesting lessons for us.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed studying math when I was a child because I had an excellent teacher who explained information very quickly and easily and made very interesting lessons for us.

The verb tense should be past tense 'enjoyed' and 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Mass' is a typo; it should be 'math'. 'Who he was information' is incorrect; it should be 'who explained information'. 'Quickly and easy' should be 'quickly and easily' (adverb).

× After learning math I became more accurate person and developed problem solving skills which helps me during every upscales.

✓ After learning math, I became a more accurate person and developed problem-solving skills which help me during every upscale.

Missing article 'a' before 'more accurate person'. 'Problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving'. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'skills'. 'Upscales' is incorrect; 'upscale' or a better word should be used depending on context.

× Some numbers are very important for me because they are connected with some special occasions.

✓ Some numbers are very important to me because they are connected with some special occasions.

The correct preposition is 'important to me' not 'important for me'.

× For example #8 is important for me, uh, because it is my date of birth.

✓ For example, #8 is important to me because it is my date of birth.

Added comma after 'For example' for clarity. 'Important for me' should be 'important to me'. Removed filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I also remember birthdays of my friends, family members, and colleagues because I always uh, give them best wishes when uh, their birth dates come across.

✓ I also remember the birthdays of my friends, family members, and colleagues because I always give them best wishes when their birthdays come around.

Added 'the' before 'birthdays' as it refers to specific birthdays. 'Birth dates come across' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'birthdays come around'. Removed filler 'uh' for clarity.