数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“remembering number”应为“remembering numbers”，以及“excellent in calculate numbers”应为“excellent at calculating numbers”。建议注意动词形式和介词搭配。此外，回答中缺少连贯的连接词，且内容略显重复。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

範例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers, but I'm excellent at calculating them. For example, I scored 100% in a math exam, which shows my calculation skills.

建議: 回答中表达不够流畅，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“the number for us is just for records”应更自然表达。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明数字的用途。

範例: In the future, I plan to become a physical therapist. Therefore, I will use numbers mainly for recording measurable assessments, such as range of motion and muscle strength.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，如“don't like”应为“didn't like”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词如“but”或“however”来表达转折，并丰富细节。

範例: When I was a child, I didn't like studying math because I found it difficult. However, now I enjoy thinking about the logic behind math problems, which makes me feel relaxed and excited.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“is represent”应为“represents”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并补充细节说明数字的重要性。

範例: I would choose the number 1024 because it represents the date my girlfriend and I started dating, October 24th, which is very special to me.

× I think I am not really good at remembering number, but I think I am excellent in calculate numbers.

✓ I think I am not really good at remembering numbers, but I think I am excellent at calculating numbers.

这里“number”应为复数形式“numbers”，因为表示多个数字。动词短语“excellent in calculate numbers”应改为“excellent at calculating numbers”，动词后应使用动名词形式。

× For example I got the 100% score in exam.

✓ For example, I got a 100% score in the exam.

“100% score”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示一个分数；“in exam”应为“in the exam”，因为特指某次考试。

× So the number for us is just for records like range of motion, muscle strength and other which can be measurable assessment.

✓ So the numbers for us are just for records like range of motion, muscle strength and others which can be measurable assessments.

“number”应为复数“numbers”，因为指多个数字；“other”应为复数“others”；“assessment”应为复数“assessments”，与前文复数保持一致。

× When I was a child, I really don't like to start math, which is really difficult for me.

✓ When I was a child, I really didn't like to start math, which was really difficult for me.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态，“don't like”改为“didn't like”，“is”改为“was”。

× However, nowadays I really like to think about the logic in math problem, which make me feel relaxed and excited.

✓ However, nowadays I really like thinking about the logic in math problems, which makes me feel relaxed and excited.

“like”后面更常用动名词形式“thinking”；“math problem”应为复数“math problems”；“make”应与主语“which”单数形式一致，改为“makes”。

× I will choose 1024 because this number is represent my affair with my girlfriend.

✓ I will choose 1024 because this number represents my affair with my girlfriend.

“number”是单数，动词应用第三人称单数形式“represents”。

× We are being together at October 24th.

✓ We have been together since October 24th.

“are being together”表达不正确，应该用现在完成时“have been together”；时间点用“since”表示从某时开始持续到现在；“at October 24th”应改为“since October 24th”。