数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

範例: Actually, I'm not very good at remembering numbers because I find them uninteresting and sometimes boring.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，正确使用否定形式，并注意时态一致。

範例: I probably won't use numbers in my future work because I want to be an English teacher, and that job doesn't require dealing with numbers every day.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用简单句表达观点，注意动词时态和主谓一致。

範例: No, I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because my scores were poor and I found it difficult to learn.

建議: 回答表达了具体内容，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意冠词使用和句子简洁性，使表达更自然。

範例: The number 12 is important to me because my birthday is in December, which is the twelfth month.

× Actually I'm not so good at remember numbers because I'm not interested in it, so I feel difficult and I think numbers sometimes boring for me.

✓ Actually I'm not so good at remembering numbers because I'm not interested in it, so I feel it is difficult and I think numbers are sometimes boring for me.

动词短语“good at”后面应接动名词形式，因此“remember”应改为“remembering”。此外，“feel difficult”应改为“feel it is difficult”以表达正确的意思，“numbers sometimes boring”应改为“numbers are sometimes boring”以符合句子结构。

× And I think probably I will not to use numbers in my future work, because I in the future I'd like to be an English teacher which don't do not require duo dealing with numbers every day.

✓ And I think probably I will not use numbers in my future work, because in the future I'd like to be an English teacher which does not require dealing with numbers every day.

情态动词“will”后面不加“to”，所以“will not to use”应改为“will not use”。“which don't do not require”中存在双重否定，应改为“which does not require”。“duo dealing”应为“dealing”。此外，主谓一致错误，“teacher which does not require”中“teacher”是单数，谓语应为“does”。

× No, actually when I was a child, my scores in math was very poor that I hasn't I hadn't mastered the skills in the math and I feel difficult in learning it.

✓ No, actually when I was a child, my scores in math were very poor because I hadn't mastered the skills in math and I felt it was difficult to learn it.

“scores”是复数，谓语动词应为“were”而非“was”。“hasn't”应为“hadn't”，时态应统一为过去时。表达“我觉得学习它很难”应为“felt it was difficult to learn it”。

× The numbers of 12 is important to me because my birthday is on the December and when it comes to 12 that is my birthday coming.

✓ The number 12 is important to me because my birthday is in December and when it comes to 12, that is when my birthday comes.

“numbers”应为单数“number”，因为指的是具体的数字12。月份前不加冠词“the”，应为“in December”。“when it comes to 12 that is my birthday coming”表达不自然，应改为“when it comes to 12, that is when my birthday comes”。