数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I work in accounting and finance, where recalling figures and performing calculations is essential. Therefore, I have developed strong numerical memory skills.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and clarify your points with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to organize your answer.

範例: Yes, definitely. Using numbers is highly important and a daily task in accounting, as we perform various calculations and analyses regularly.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler phrases like 'I know being honest' and improve sentence flow with linking words.

範例: To be honest, I didn't enjoy studying math as a child. I even failed the subject in 4th grade, which made it difficult for me to like it.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks specific examples. Try to be more specific and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: It depends on the situation, but generally, all numbers are important to me because I use them daily. For example, I rely on numbers for budgeting, scheduling, and work-related calculations.

× I'm an accounting and finance field and it's our job to remember number and do number crunching.

✓ I'm in the accounting and finance field and it's our job to remember numbers and do number crunching.

The phrase 'I'm an accounting and finance field' is incorrect because a person cannot be a field; it should be 'I'm in the accounting and finance field'. Also, 'remember number' should be plural 'remember numbers' because 'numbers' is countable and plural here.

× Therefore I'm good in it.

✓ Therefore, I'm good at it.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' when referring to a skill or ability is 'at', not 'in'. Hence, 'good in it' should be corrected to 'good at it'.

× I think using number is highly important and prioritize in our field accounting and it's, it's, it's a daily task to use different numbers and in different calculations and punctuations and it's a daily task.

✓ I think using numbers is highly important and prioritized in our field of accounting, and it's a daily task to use different numbers in various calculations and operations.

'Using number' should be plural 'using numbers' because it refers to multiple numbers. Also, 'prioritize' should be 'prioritized' to match the passive meaning. 'Field accounting' should be 'field of accounting'. 'Punctuations' is incorrect in this context; 'operations' or 'calculations' is more appropriate.

× I know being honest I really didn't enjoy studying maths when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, I really didn't enjoy studying maths when I was a child.

The phrase 'I know being honest' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'To be honest' to express honesty about past feelings.

× I still remember when I was in 4th grade I failed math subject wise so I really didn't enjoy that.

✓ I still remember when I was in 4th grade, I failed the math subject, so I really didn't enjoy it.

'Math subject wise' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'the math subject'. Also, 'that' should be 'it' referring to the subject.

× Well, I think it depends on situation, because all numbers are equally important to me and all, all of the number are used in my daily routine life and I can't prioritize one number or two.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the situation, because all numbers are equally important to me and all of the numbers are used in my daily routine, and I can't prioritize one number over another.

'Depends on situation' needs the article 'the' before 'situation'. 'All of the number' should be plural 'all of the numbers'. 'Daily routine life' is incorrect; 'daily routine' suffices. Also, 'prioritize one number or two' is unclear; 'prioritize one number over another' is clearer.