新闻— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，明确表达兴趣原因。

範例: Yes, I am very interested in news because I enjoy staying informed about current events. Every morning, I browse online news to keep myself updated.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议使用正确时态，简洁明了地说明获取新闻的方式。

範例: I usually find news online every day because I study this subject professionally and need to keep up with the latest information.

建議: 回答内容混乱，句子不完整且含糊。建议明确表达愿望并给出具体理由，避免无关内容。

範例: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I am passionate about reporting news and meeting different people to learn about new things.

建議: 语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态和词汇，简洁说明情况。

範例: Actually, I didn't read the news this morning because I was busy preparing for an exam. But I usually read news regularly.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明与朋友讨论新闻的情况。

範例: Yes, my friends and I often discuss news about events happening in our society, both in our country and abroad.

× I'm the student who measuring the Georgism

✓ I'm the student who is measuring the Georgism

这里缺少助动词“is”，导致动词现在分词形式使用错误。定语从句中，动词需要有助动词构成进行时态。

× I like browsing some news on line every morning

✓ I like browsing some news online every morning

“on line”应写作一个词“online”，表示“在线”。

× I also know how to write a good news in my classes

✓ I also know how to write good news in my classes

“news”是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。

× I found news everyday

✓ I find news every day

“news”是不可数名词，不能用过去式“found”表达习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“find”。“everyday”是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应分开写为“every day”，表示“每天”。

× I had to catch the latest news

✓ I have to catch the latest news

根据上下文，表达习惯动作或现在的职责，应使用现在时“have to”，而非过去时“had to”。

× I think being a journalist, Julie says

✓ I think being a journalist is interesting

句子结构混乱，“Julie says”无意义且不合上下文，应删除。

× It's an interesting thing because you can make so many different new people and. There about new things

✓ It's an interesting job because you can meet so many different new people and learn about new things

句子结构不完整且用词错误，“make new people”应为“meet new people”，“There about new things”无意义，应改为“learn about new things”。

× Actually I didn't really knew this morning because I was too busy to preparing for the examination

✓ Actually I didn't really know this morning because I was too busy preparing for the examination

“didn't”后应接动词原形“know”，而非过去式“knew”。“to preparing”应为动词不定式“to prepare”或直接用动名词“preparing”，此处省略“to”更自然。

× I just take it now, but usually I always look bro some news

✓ I just took it now, but usually I always look for some news

“now”表示过去刚发生的动作，应使用过去时“took”。“look bro”应为“look for”，表示“寻找”。

× Also the student

✓ Also, as students,

“Also the student”表达不完整且错误，应改为“Also, as students,”表示“作为学生，我们也……”。

× We always pay attention to the things happening this society

✓ We always pay attention to the things happening in this society

“happening”后应接介词“in”表示“在……发生”。

× not only in our country but also aboard

✓ not only in our country but also abroad

“aboard”意为“在船上、飞机上”，此处应使用“abroad”，表示“在国外”。