新闻— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'hampering in my nation as well as in con'. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding incomplete words. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I am quite interested in news. I enjoy reading newspapers, especially The Hindu and The Tribune, because they provide detailed and accurate information about current events affecting my country and the world.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating words like 'news news' and incomplete sentences like 'Atta 247 and'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide complete information.

範例: I usually find news by reading newspapers like The Hindu and The Tribune. Besides that, I get news from my family members and watch news channels. Moreover, I browse articles and blogs on online apps such as Atta 247.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Avoid repeating words like 'chance or opportunity' and clarify phrases like 'we aware and inform the population'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I have never thought about it before, but if I ever get a chance to become a journalist, I would definitely take it because it is a rewarding and responsible job. Journalists help to inform and raise awareness among the public.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'the second one was introduction of'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details clearly and completely.

範例: Yes, as usual, I read the newspaper this morning. I learned two major things about my country: first, the introduction of AI into the Kerala education curriculum, and second, a new government policy on environmental protection.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more concise and natural. Avoid informal phrases like 'chill around' in formal speaking tests. Also, the last sentence 'So I think this question is very important' is unnecessary and does not answer the question directly.

範例: Yes, in the evenings when we meet at the park, my friends and I have meaningful conversations about recent events in the country and possible future developments.

× I enjoy reading newspapers, especially The Hindu and the Tribune because it provides me a detailed and correct information of current events that are hampering in my nation as well as in con.

✓ I enjoy reading newspapers, especially The Hindu and The Tribune because they provide me with detailed and correct information about current events that are happening in my nation as well as in the country.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to plural newspapers; it should be 'they'. Also, 'a detailed and correct information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The preposition 'of' should be 'about'. The phrase 'hampering in my nation' is incorrect; 'happening in my nation' is appropriate.

× Rest of the news news I get from my family members are news channels.

✓ The rest of the news I get from my family members and news channels.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('news news'). It lacks a proper verb and conjunction. Correcting it to a complete sentence with proper conjunctions improves clarity.

× Moreover, I also browse some articles and blogs on online apps like Atta 247 and.

✓ Moreover, I also browse some articles and blogs on online apps like Atta 247.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the list. Also, 'on online apps' is acceptable but 'in online apps' is more common; however, the main issue is the incomplete sentence.

× Well, I never think about it, but if I ever get a chance to become a journalist, I would definitely love to grab that chance or opportunity because I find it is quite rewarding and responsible job because we aware and inform the population.

✓ Well, I have never thought about it, but if I ever get a chance to become a journalist, I would definitely love to grab that opportunity because I find it is quite a rewarding and responsible job as we are aware of and inform the population.

The phrase 'I never think about it' should be in present perfect 'I have never thought about it' to indicate experience. 'Grab that chance or opportunity' is redundant; 'opportunity' suffices. 'We aware and inform' is incorrect; it should be 'we are aware of and inform'. Also, 'a rewarding and responsible job' needs the article 'a'.

× Yes, as my usual routine I read the newspaper today I got major 2 information about my country.

✓ Yes, as per my usual routine, I read the newspaper today and got two major pieces of information about my country.

The sentence lacks conjunctions and articles. 'Major 2 information' is incorrect; 'two major pieces of information' is correct because 'information' is uncountable and requires 'pieces' to quantify. Also, 'as my usual routine' should be 'as per my usual routine'.

× First one is introduction of AI into the Kerala education curriculum and the second one was introduction of.

✓ The first one is the introduction of AI into the Kerala education curriculum, and the second one was the introduction of [missing information].

The sentence is incomplete and lacks articles before 'introduction'. It also ends abruptly without completing the second point.

× Yes, in the evening when we chill around in the park together, we talk and have a meaningful conversation about what happened in the country and what is going to happen in the near future.

✓ Yes, in the evening when we chill around the park together, we talk and have meaningful conversations about what has happened in the country and what is going to happen in the near future.

The preposition 'in the park' is acceptable but 'around the park' is more natural here. 'Have a meaningful conversation' should be plural 'have meaningful conversations' to match the context. Also, 'what happened' should be 'what has happened' to indicate recent past events relevant to the present.