新闻— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达自然流畅。例如，“most of news are negative”应改为“most of the news is negative”。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

範例: Honestly, I am not very interested in the news because most of the news in Hong Kong nowadays is negative, which makes me feel sad. Instead, I prefer to spend time improving my hobbies and skills.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“some of the new in my or tablet”不清楚，应改为“on my phone or tablet”。建议使用连贯的句子，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I usually find news on my phone or tablet. Social media is very convenient because I can type keywords in the search box and quickly get many news articles to read.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“not good write a essay”应为“not good at writing essays”，“let alone a nuisance”表达不清。建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达观点。

範例: Honestly, no. I am not good at writing essays, and I think being a journalist can be dangerous because they sometimes face risks while reporting. So, I don't want to be a journalist.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“do not following”应为“do not follow”，“a lot of negative news which make me”应为“a lot of negative news which makes me”。建议简洁明了地回答问题。

範例: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I don't follow the news much. There are many negative news in Hong Kong that make me feel sad and stressed.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“go to shopping crazy”应为“go shopping crazily”，“I would afford to talk to my”句子不完整。建议使用完整句子并注意语法。

範例: I occasionally talk with my friends about the news. For example, if I see news about discounts on dresses or clothes I like, I discuss it with my friends and we go shopping together. However, I avoid talking about negative news with them.

× most of news are negative in Hong Kong which can let me feel sad.

✓ most of the news is negative in Hong Kong which makes me feel sad.

“news”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“news are”，应使用单数形式“news is”。此外，“most of”后面通常接定冠词“the”加名词。动词“can let me feel sad”表达不自然，改为“makes me feel sad”更合适。

× I usually find some of the new in my or tablet.

✓ I usually find some of the news on my phone or tablet.

“new”应为“news”，且“news”是不可数名词。介词“in”应改为“on”，表示在手机或平板上。

× I usually find some of the new in my or tablet.

✓ I usually find some of the news on my phone or tablet.

介词“in”用法错误，表示设备上内容时应使用“on”。

× Honestly, no, because I'm not good write a essay, let alone a nuisance.

✓ Honestly, no, because I'm not good at writing an essay, let alone a journalist.

缺少介词“at”来连接“good”和动词短语。名词“essay”前应加不定冠词“an”。“nuisance”用词错误，应为“journalist”。

× Honestly, no, because I'm not good write a essay, let alone a nuisance.

✓ Honestly, no, because I'm not good at writing an essay, let alone a journalist.

动词“write”后应使用动名词形式“writing”，且前面需加介词“at”。

× I have mentioned that I do not following news as much because nowadays in Hong Kong there are a lot of negative news which make me feel sad and stressful.

✓ I have mentioned that I do not follow the news as much because nowadays in Hong Kong there is a lot of negative news which makes me feel sad and stressed.

“news”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“news which make”，应使用单数动词“makes”。“following”应改为动词原形“follow”。“stressful”形容事物，描述人的感受应为“stressed”。

× I have mentioned that I do not following news as much because nowadays in Hong Kong there are a lot of negative news which make me feel sad and stressful.

✓ I have mentioned that I do not follow the news as much because nowadays in Hong Kong there is a lot of negative news which makes me feel sad and stressed.

“do not”后应接动词原形“follow”，而非现在分词“following”。

× I talked with my friends about the news occasionally.

✓ I talk with my friends about the news occasionally.

句子描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“talk”，而非过去时“talked”。

× I can just put some of the words on the searching box, then the news will come in and I can watch a lot of news in the social media.

✓ I can just put some words in the search box, then the news will come up and I can watch a lot of news on social media.

“put words on the searching box”应为“put words in the search box”。“come in”改为“come up”更符合表达。介词“in the social media”应为“on social media”。

× But if it is the negative view, I would afford to talk to my.

✓ But if it is a negative view, I would avoid talking about it with my friends.

“afford to talk to my”表达不完整且用词错误，应为“avoid talking about it with my friends”。

× which make me feel sad and stressful.

✓ which makes me feel sad and stressed.

“stressful”形容事物，描述人的感受应使用“stressed”。

× I would afford to talk to my.

✓ I would avoid talking to my friends.

“afford”用法错误，应为“avoid”。且句子不完整，需补充“friends”。