新闻— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. For example, instead of "I feel like it keeps me really up to date and what's going on in the world," you could say "it keeps me informed about current events worldwide."

範例: Yes, I'm quite interested in news because it keeps me informed about current events worldwide.

建議: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing in your answer. Try to use correct expressions and avoid mistakes like "most of the fine" and "sometime." Also, be more specific about the platforms you use.

範例: Well, most of the time I find news on social media platforms like Twitter or Facebook, and sometimes I watch the news on television.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by adding articles and plural forms where needed, and by expanding with linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it offers the opportunity to explore different topics and share important information with the public.

建議: Your answer provides specific details, which is good, but there are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid phrases like "look up for news" and "I saw news what's happening." Use linking words more naturally.

範例: Yes, I read the news this morning to stay updated on world events. For example, I learned about a volcanic eruption in Jamaica, and I also read about severe air pollution affecting Delhi.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors such as unnecessary prepositions and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and linking words.

範例: Yes, whenever I meet my friends and we have enough time, we discuss current events and share our thoughts and opinions. Sometimes, we even have differing views.

× Well, most of the fine I find news on social media or sometime even on the television.

✓ Well, most of the time I find news on social media or sometimes even on the television.

The phrase 'most of the fine' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'most of the time' to indicate frequency. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to correctly express occasional occurrence.

× Yes, I would like to be journalist because it offers opportunity to explore different topics and share important information with the public.

✓ Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it offers opportunities to explore different topics and share important information with the public.

The noun 'journalist' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match the plural 'different topics' and to sound natural.

× Yes, I did look up for news this morning so I can be updated about what's happening in the world.

✓ Yes, I did look up news this morning so I can be updated about what's happening in the world.

The phrasal verb 'look up' does not require the preposition 'for' after it. Including 'for' is incorrect in this context.

× For example, I saw news what's happening in Jamaica about volcanic eruption.

✓ For example, I saw news about what's happening in Jamaica regarding the volcanic eruption.

The original sentence lacks proper prepositions and article usage. 'News about' is correct, and 'regarding the volcanic eruption' clarifies the topic. Also, 'volcanic eruption' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Moreover, I saw air pollution affecting the city of Delhi.

✓ Moreover, I saw that air pollution is affecting the city of Delhi.

The original sentence is understandable but incomplete. Adding 'that' and the verb 'is' makes the sentence grammatically complete and clearer.

× Yes, whenever I meet my friends and we have enough time, we discuss about what's happening and we share our thoughts and opinions.

✓ Yes, whenever I meet my friends and we have enough time, we discuss what's happening and we share our thoughts and opinions.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about' after it. Including 'about' is incorrect.

× Sometimes we do contradict on our opinions.

✓ Sometimes we do contradict each other on our opinions.

The verb 'contradict' is transitive and usually requires an object. Adding 'each other' clarifies the reciprocal action. Also, 'on our opinions' is acceptable but could be omitted for simplicity.