分享— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and clear structure. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

範例: Yes, my parents encouraged me to share because it helps build strong relationships. Sharing teaches us to be considerate and thoughtful towards others, which is very important in society.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Use clear vocabulary and complete sentences. Start with a topic sentence and explain with specific examples, using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

範例: I usually share school supplies like pencils and erasers with my friends because sometimes they forget to bring them. For example, I often lend my pencil during class.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to explain your reason clearly and use more natural expressions.

範例: I prefer not to share makeup items because hygiene is very important to me. Sharing such personal items can spread germs, so I avoid it to stay healthy.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Avoid unnecessary phrases.

範例: I think more people will share cars in the future because cars are expensive to buy and maintain. Also, sharing cars helps protect the environment by reducing pollution.

× Sharing is very good things, maybe because it makes people have some considerable minds.

✓ Sharing is a very good thing, maybe because it makes people have some considerate minds.

The noun 'things' should be singular 'thing' because 'Sharing' is singular. Also, 'considerable minds' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'considerate' to describe thoughtful minds.

× I usually share a pencil and something style, something related to academic and school.

✓ I usually share a pencil and some stationery, something related to academics and school.

'Something style' is incorrect; 'some stationery' fits better. 'Academic' should be pluralized to 'academics' to refer to subjects or studies.

× cars prices is very expensive.

✓ car prices are very expensive.

'Cars prices' should be 'car prices' as a compound noun, and the verb should be plural 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'prices'.

× cars prices is very expensive.

✓ car prices are very expensive.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'prices'; it should be 'are'.