分享— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词。

範例: Yes, my parents taught me to share with others because sharing shows kindness. I believe sharing things I like makes both me and others happy.

建議: 回答内容较为笼统，建议提供更具体的细节，并改进表达的流畅性和准确性。

範例: I like to share snacks and books with others because snacks can bring immediate joy, and books can enrich their lives over time.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构和词汇使用，避免重复。

範例: It depends on culture. For example, in China, people avoid sharing shoes because shoes symbolize bad luck, so they are not suitable to share.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和多余词汇。

範例: Yes, recently I shared my travel experience with my best friends. Last summer, I visited Guizhou, which was a fascinating trip, so I enjoyed telling them about it.

建議: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法和用词错误，建议简化句子并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: I would share good news with my dad first because he is patient and always encourages me to do better.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议完整回答问题并注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用。

範例: I share different kinds of news with my friends. For example, I tell them about my exam results and travel experiences when I am happy, and I also share my problems when I feel sad.

× Definitely yes, my parents teach me to share something to others because sharing is kind of, uh, kindness and in my view, I think share something what I like to uh, S someone is really happy.

✓ Definitely yes, my parents taught me to share things with others because sharing is a kind of kindness and in my view, I think sharing something I like with someone makes them really happy.

这里的时态应该用过去式，因为是在谈论过去发生的事情。动词teach应改为taught，share应改为sharing，表达更自然。

× Definitely yes, my parents teach me to share something to others because sharing is kind of, uh, kindness and in my view, I think share something what I like to uh, S someone is really happy.

✓ Definitely yes, my parents taught me to share things with others because sharing is a kind of kindness and in my view, I think sharing something I like with someone makes them really happy.

动词share后面应使用介词with而不是to，表示“与某人分享”。

× Definitely yes, my parents teach me to share something to others because sharing is kind of, uh, kindness and in my view, I think share something what I like to uh, S someone is really happy.

✓ Definitely yes, my parents taught me to share things with others because sharing is a kind of kindness and in my view, I think sharing something I like with someone makes them really happy.

share后面的宾语应为复数things，而不是单数something，更符合语境。

× There are lots of things I like to share with others. People often give some flowers or a gift to someone, but for me I love to share some snacks or just books to fulfill someone life.

✓ There are lots of things I like to share with others. People often give flowers or a gift to someone, but for me I love to share some snacks or just books to fulfill someone's life.

flowers前不需要some，gift前加a表示单数。someone life应为someone's life，表示所有格。

× There are lots of things I like to share with others. People often give some flowers or a gift to someone, but for me I love to share some snacks or just books to fulfill someone life.

✓ There are lots of things I like to share with others. People often give flowers or a gift to someone, but for me I love to share some snacks or just books to fulfill someone's life.

fulfill后面应接所有格someone's life，表示“满足某人的生活”。

× Well, I think that it depends on different culture. In China people don't share the shoes to others because the shoes in Chinese is symbol of evil. People don't like the these things when sent to others.

✓ Well, I think that it depends on different cultures. In China, people don't share shoes with others because shoes in Chinese culture are a symbol of evil. People don't like these things when sent to others.

culture应为复数cultures，表示不同的文化。share后应使用with others而非to others。the shoes前不需要定冠词。the these是错误的重复。

× Well, I think that it depends on different culture. In China people don't share the shoes to others because the shoes in Chinese is symbol of evil. People don't like the these things when sent to others.

✓ Well, I think that it depends on different cultures. In China, people don't share shoes with others because shoes in Chinese culture are a symbol of evil. People don't like these things when sent to others.

shoes应为复数，且前面不加定冠词。symbol应为单数，主语shoes复数时谓语用are。

× Definitely yes, I shared my travel experience to my best friends. Several months ago is in the summer holiday, I went to the Guizhou for travel and that that is a fascinating experience. So I want to talk about to my friends.

✓ Definitely yes, I shared my travel experience with my best friends. Several months ago, during the summer holiday, I went to Guizhou for travel and that was a fascinating experience. So I wanted to talk about it to my friends.

过去发生的事情应使用过去时态。shared后应接with而非to。that that重复，应改为that was。want应改为wanted保持时态一致。

× Definitely yes, I shared my travel experience to my best friends. Several months ago is in the summer holiday, I went to the Guizhou for travel and that that is a fascinating experience. So I want to talk about to my friends.

✓ Definitely yes, I shared my travel experience with my best friends. Several months ago, during the summer holiday, I went to Guizhou for travel and that was a fascinating experience. So I wanted to talk about it to my friends.

share后应使用with而非to。talk about后不直接接to，应为talk about it to my friends。

× Definitely yes, I shared my travel experience to my best friends. Several months ago is in the summer holiday, I went to the Guizhou for travel and that that is a fascinating experience. So I want to talk about to my friends.

✓ Definitely yes, I shared my travel experience with my best friends. Several months ago, during the summer holiday, I went to Guizhou for travel and that was a fascinating experience. So I wanted to talk about it to my friends.

talk about后应接宾语，不能直接接介词to，正确表达是talk about it to my friends。

× I think that it might be my dad because my dad is a patient person and when I share the good news with him, he will respond it in a happiness mind and encourage me to do better in the next time.

✓ I think that it might be my dad because my dad is a patient person and when I share the good news with him, he will respond to it happily and encourage me to do better next time.

respond后应接介词to，且happiness mind表达不自然，应改为happily。in the next time应为next time。

× I think that it might be my dad because my dad is a patient person and when I share the good news with him, he will respond it in a happiness mind and encourage me to do better in the next time.

✓ I think that it might be my dad because my dad is a patient person and when I share the good news with him, he will respond to it happily and encourage me to do better next time.

respond后应加介词to，表示“回应某事”。

× There are many types of news I will share with my friends. For example, for some happy things I would like to share the good news about my examination and the travel experience, but for bad experience I would share my.

✓ There are many types of news I will share with my friends. For example, for some happy things I would like to share the good news about my examination and travel experience, but for bad experiences I would share mine.

bad experience应为复数bad experiences，且share后应接宾语，mine表示“我的（经历）”。