电影— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は少し不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「I really watch the movies」は不自然で、「I watch movies often」などの表現が適切です。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いでしょう。

範例: I watch movies occasionally because I am busy with part-time jobs and schoolwork. However, I wish I had more free time to watch movies more often.

建議: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「I really watch comedy movies」は不自然で、「I usually watch comedy movies」が良いです。また、接続詞を使って理由を明確にすると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually watch comedy movies because they are fun to watch with my friends. They always make me laugh and help me relax.

建議: 回答は比較的良いですが、同じ内容の繰り返しがあり、少し冗長です。例えば、「watch movie at home」が2回出てくるので、表現を変えて簡潔にすると良いでしょう。

範例: I prefer watching movies at home because it's more comfortable and I don't have to worry about other people. Also, it's very convenient to watch movies anytime I want.

建議: 回答は否定的で内容も限定的です。IELTSでは多角的な視点を示すことが望ましいです。また、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いので、より自然で具体的な理由を述べる練習が必要です。

範例: I find it challenging to watch movies in other languages because I have to read subtitles all the time, which can be distracting. However, I understand that watching foreign movies can be useful for learning about different cultures.

× I really watch the movies because I'm busy with part jobs and school works if I have some free time.

✓ I really watch movies because I'm busy with part-time jobs and school work if I have some free time.

'The movies' should be 'movies' because we are talking about movies in general, not specific ones. 'Part jobs' should be 'part-time jobs' as the correct term. 'School works' should be 'school work' because 'work' is uncountable in this context.

× I really watch comedy movies because it's more fun to watch that movie with my friends.

✓ I really watch comedy movies because it's more fun to watch those movies with my friends.

'That movie' is singular, but the subject is plural 'comedy movies', so it should be 'those movies' to match the plural form.

× It's more comfortable and convenient to watch movie at home.

✓ It's more comfortable and convenient to watch movies at home.

'Movie' should be plural 'movies' because we talk about watching movies in general, not a single movie.

× No, I don't like to watch movies in other language because it's hard to enjoy the movies to have to read subtitles all time.

✓ No, I don't like to watch movies in other languages because it's hard to enjoy the movies when I have to read subtitles all the time.

'Language' should be plural 'languages' because there are multiple languages. Also, 'all time' should be 'all the time' for correct expression.

× I'm not interested in other country culture.

✓ I'm not interested in other countries' culture.

'Other country culture' is incorrect; it should be 'other countries' culture' to indicate culture of other countries, using plural possessive form.