电影— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word forms.

範例: I rarely watch movies because of my busy schedule. However, I believe movies are important for both entertainment and learning. For example, the last movie I watched was 'Taj Mahal', which inspired me greatly.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct sentence structures and vocabulary. Also, avoid mixing too many ideas in one sentence. Use linking words to explain your points clearly and provide specific examples.

範例: I usually watch various kinds of movies such as comedy, action, and romance. The last movie I saw was a romantic film called 'Pushpa'. It not only entertained me but also taught me about love and relationships.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and filler words. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct grammar. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and explain your preferences clearly with reasons.

範例: My preference depends on my free time. If I have little time, I prefer going to the cinema because the experience is more exciting and immersive. However, when I have more time, I enjoy watching movies at home for comfort.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to complete your thoughts and use proper grammar. Also, explain clearly how watching movies in other languages benefits you, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, watching movies in other languages, especially English, is very useful for me. It improves my communication and speaking skills, which is important because I plan to go abroad in the future.

× It not only provide entertainment but it also, uh, boost knowledge of individuals.

✓ It not only provides entertainment but it also boosts knowledge of individuals.

The verbs 'provide' and 'boost' should be in the third person singular form 'provides' and 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× I clearly remember that the last movie that I watched was Taj Mahal, which inspired me a lot.

✓ I clearly remember that the last movie I watched was Taj Mahal, which inspired me a lot.

The sentence is mostly correct but removing the second 'that' improves clarity and flow. The past tense 'watched' and 'inspired' are correctly used here.

× I usually want a numerous kind of movies like comedy, action, romantic and I clearly remember that the last movie that I watched as a romantic movie, it's a pushpa to it not only broadened the horizon of my knowledge but it also inspired me how to love with each other.

✓ I usually want numerous kinds of movies like comedy, action, and romantic. I clearly remember that the last movie I watched was a romantic movie, Pushpa 2. It not only broadened the horizon of my knowledge but also inspired me on how to love each other.

The phrase 'a numerous kind of movies' is incorrect; 'numerous kinds of movies' is correct because 'kinds' is plural. Also, 'it's a pushpa to' is unclear and corrected to 'Pushpa 2' assuming the movie title. The verb 'broadened' is correct in past tense. Added missing conjunctions and corrected prepositions for clarity.

× I clearly remember that the last movie that I watched as a romantic movie, it's a pushpa to it not only broadened the horizon of my knowledge but it also inspired me how to love with each other.

✓ I clearly remember that the last movie I watched was a romantic movie, Pushpa 2. It not only broadened the horizon of my knowledge but also inspired me on how to love each other.

The preposition 'how to love with each other' is incorrect; it should be 'how to love each other' or 'how to love one another'. The preposition 'on' is added before 'how to love' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually want a numerous kind of movies like comedy, action, romantic and I clearly remember that the last movie that I watched as a romantic movie, it's a pushpa to it not only broadened the horizon of my knowledge but it also inspired me how to love with each other.

✓ I usually want numerous kinds of movies like comedy, action, and romantic. I clearly remember that the last movie I watched was a romantic movie, Pushpa 2. It not only broadened the horizon of my knowledge but also inspired me on how to love each other.

The quantifier 'a numerous kind' is incorrect; 'numerous kinds' is the correct plural form to match 'movies'. Also, added commas and conjunctions for better sentence structure.

× Well, watching a movie, it's quite a depend on the time.

✓ Well, watching a movie quite depends on the time.

The phrase 'it's quite a depend on the time' is incorrect. The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' and the article 'a' is unnecessary. The correct phrase is 'quite depends on the time'.

× Whenever I have a more lesser time, I definitely, uh, go to cinema in order to watch a movie.

✓ Whenever I have less time, I definitely go to the cinema to watch a movie.

The phrase 'a more lesser time' is incorrect; 'less time' is the correct quantifier. Also, 'go to cinema' should be 'go to the cinema' as 'cinema' is a countable noun requiring an article.

× Whenever I have a more lesser time, I definitely, uh, go to cinema in order to watch a movie.

✓ Whenever I have less time, I definitely go to the cinema to watch a movie.

The noun 'cinema' is countable and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'a more lesser time' is incorrect; 'less time' is the correct form.

× Because I think that uh, watching movie in a cinema is quite interesting and it thrills thriller experience for me.

✓ Because I think that watching a movie in a cinema is quite interesting and it provides a thrilling experience for me.

The phrase 'thrills thriller experience' is incorrect. The adjective 'thrilling' should be used to describe 'experience'. Also, 'watching movie' should be 'watching a movie'.

× Because I think that uh, watching movie in a cinema is quite interesting and it thrills thriller experience for me.

✓ Because I think that watching a movie in the cinema is quite interesting and it provides a thrilling experience for me.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'cinema' to specify the place. Also, 'watching movie' should be 'watching a movie'.

× It in entertainment a lot.

✓ It is very entertaining.

The original sentence 'It in entertainment a lot' is ungrammatical. The correct sentence is 'It is very entertaining' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Moreover, when I watch a movie at home.

✓ Moreover, when I watch a movie at home, I feel relaxed.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause. Adding a main clause completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Of course, it's quite a fruitful for me if I watch a movies of a different language, especially of English.

✓ Of course, it's quite fruitful for me if I watch movies in a different language, especially English.

The phrase 'a movies' is incorrect; 'movies' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'a fruitful' is incorrect; 'fruitful' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. The preposition 'of' is replaced with 'in' for correct usage.

× Of course, it's quite a fruitful for me if I watch a movies of a different language, especially of English.

✓ Of course, it's quite fruitful for me if I watch movies in a different language, especially English.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used before 'a different language' and 'English'. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to the language of the movies.

× When I watch movies of English language it, it enhance my English communication as well as speaking skills, which help me a lot because nowadays I want to go abroad so in.

✓ When I watch movies in English, it enhances my English communication as well as speaking skills, which help me a lot because nowadays I want to go abroad.

The phrase 'movies of English language' is awkward; 'movies in English' is correct. The verb 'enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence ending 'so in' is incomplete and removed for clarity.