电影— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınız təbii və məzmunludur, lakin 'preferred' feilinin keçmiş zaman forması burada uyğunsuzdur. Daha qısa və aydın ifadə istifadə edin, məsələn, 'I usually watch movies twice a week because of my busy schedule.'

範例: I usually watch movies twice a week, mostly on weekends when I have free time, because I find them relaxing and entertaining.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və tamamlanmamış fikirlər var. Daha qısa, aydın və tam cümlələr qurun. Məsələn, 'I usually watch romantic comedies because they are relaxing and enjoyable. I don't like horror movies because they scare me.'

範例: I usually watch romantic comedies because they are relaxing and enjoyable. I don't like horror movies because they scare me.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha qısa və aydın ifadə istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I prefer watching movies at home because it is more comfortable and I can pause and resume whenever I want.'

範例: I prefer watching movies at home because it is more comfortable and I can pause and resume whenever I want.

建議: Cavabınız faydalıdır, amma çoxlu 'uh' və 'umm' kimi fasilələr var. Daha təmiz və axıcı danışmağa çalışın. Məsələn, 'Yes, watching movies in other languages helps you learn grammar, pronunciation, and daily expressions.'

範例: Yes, watching movies in other languages helps you learn grammar, pronunciation, and daily expressions.

× I mostly preferred watching movies every day because I find them relaxed and entertaining, but due to my busy schedule I only watch twice a week, mostly on weekends when I have free time.

✓ I mostly prefer watching movies every day because I find them relaxing and entertaining, but due to my busy schedule I only watch twice a week, mostly on weekends when I have free time.

The student incorrectly used the past tense 'preferred' instead of the present tense 'prefer' to describe a habitual action. Also, 'relaxed' should be 'relaxing' as it describes the effect movies have on the student, which requires an adjective form ending with '-ing'.

× As I am a romcom person I only watch a romantic comedy films because I find them more relaxing and when I watch ROM com films I feel relaxed and I enjoy and have fun but I don't like horror movies because they.

✓ As I am a romcom person, I only watch romantic comedy films because I find them more relaxing. When I watch romcom films, I feel relaxed and enjoy myself, but I don't like horror movies because of them.

The phrase 'a romantic comedy films' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'films'; it should be 'romantic comedy films' without 'a'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity. 'Enjoy and have fun' should be 'enjoy myself' for grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to watch films at home because it feels more relaxed and I have something. I prefer watching at home because my home is my comfort zone and I'm a kind of person that I who don't want to leave his comfort zone and watching at home is more comfortable for me. I can stop a movie and watch again whenever I I want and.

✓ I prefer to watch films at home because it feels more relaxing and comfortable. My home is my comfort zone, and I'm the kind of person who doesn't want to leave it. Watching at home is more comfortable for me. I can pause a movie and watch it again whenever I want.

The original sentences had awkward phrasing and incomplete thoughts. 'Feels more relaxed' should be 'feels more relaxing' or 'more comfortable'. The phrase 'I have something' is unclear and removed. The sentence 'I'm a kind of person that I who don't want' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm the kind of person who doesn't want'. The last sentence was incomplete and needed correction to 'pause a movie and watch it again whenever I want.'

× Yes, I think, uh, it's useful because, uh, when you're learning new language and you watch, uh, uh, movies in that language, uh, you can learn the structure of grammar and you can hear the pronunciation, how they, umm, use it and you can, uh, learn daily expressions from movies.

✓ Yes, I think it's useful because when you're learning a new language and you watch movies in that language, you can learn the structure of grammar and hear the pronunciation, how they use it, and learn daily expressions from movies.

The phrase 'learning new language' is missing the article 'a' before 'new language'. Also, the sentence was cluttered with filler words which were removed for clarity. The preposition use was mostly correct but needed article correction.