电子书— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state your preference first, then give clear reasons using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'though conception of people by everyone is amplifying'.

範例: I prefer e-books over paper books because they are very convenient to carry anywhere. Moreover, with the increasing use of technology, many people find e-books easier to access and read.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state when you read online and why, using linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases like 'new top pictures' and 'order right in that topic'.

範例: I usually read online when I come across new topics or pictures that interest me. At those times, I do research to find detailed information, especially for my school assignments.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and irrelevant phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and avoid confusing sentences. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I will read more online in the future because technology is advancing and more information is available on the Internet. It is convenient and helps me stay updated.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state what you like to read online and why, using correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

範例: In recent years, I have become health conscious. Therefore, I like to read health articles written by doctors and also keep myself updated with the latest news on online platforms.

建議: Your answer has unclear and incomplete sentences. Try to clearly compare reading online and on paper, using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'requires you know more or' and 'don't pull attention'.

範例: I think reading online and on paper are quite similar in terms of content. However, reading on a screen can be more tiring for the eyes and may require more concentration than reading a paper book.

× I properly books overall paper books because I think it is very convenient to carry anywhere we want and the moreover, I think nowadays though conception of people by everyone is amplifying at an alarming rate.

✓ I prefer paper books overall because I think they are very convenient to carry anywhere we want. Moreover, I think nowadays the concept of people using e-books is amplifying at an alarming rate.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. 'Properly books overall paper books' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer paper books overall'. Also, 'the moreover' is incorrect; 'Moreover' should start a new sentence. The phrase 'though conception of people by everyone is amplifying' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'the concept of people using e-books is amplifying'. Clear and correct word order improves sentence clarity.

× There are a lot of times when I read online whenever a new top pictures, you know, come in front of me and I have to do a lot of research on that.

✓ There are many times when I read online whenever new top pictures, you know, come before me and I have to do a lot of research on them.

The phrase 'come in front of me' is better expressed as 'come before me' in this context. Also, 'a lot of times' is better as 'many times' for countable instances. 'Research on that' is corrected to 'research on them' to agree with plural 'pictures'. Proper preposition use and pronoun agreement improve sentence correctness.

× So that's the time when I read the mostly online about the information that I need to order right in that topic or the segment I get from school.

✓ So that's the time when I mostly read online about the information that I need to find on that topic or the segment I get from school.

The phrase 'read the mostly online' is incorrect; it should be 'mostly read online'. 'Order right in that topic' is unclear and corrected to 'find on that topic'. Correct quantifier placement and clearer wording improve sentence meaning.

× As technology has emerged right, so the information on Internet is increasing day by day.

✓ As technology has emerged, the information on the Internet is increasing day by day.

The word 'right' is unnecessary and informal here. 'Information on Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before 'Internet'. Correct pronoun and article use make the sentence grammatically correct.

× So I think yes, in future also I will love life to lead an online.

✓ So I think yes, in the future I will love to live an online life.

The phrase 'love life to lead an online' is incorrect. It should be 'love to live an online life'. Also, 'in future' requires the definite article 'the' to become 'in the future'. Correct pronoun and article use improve clarity.

× It's not about my life. Kim Berto about or you know the time, the circumstances I think one have to eat and online.

✓ It's not about my life, but about, you know, the time and the circumstances. I think one has to eat and live online.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'Kim Berto' which seems to be a mishearing or typo. 'One have' should be 'one has'. 'Eat and online' is incomplete; corrected to 'eat and live online'. Proper pronoun and verb agreement and clearer phrasing are necessary.

× Some past few years I'm very health conscious.

✓ For the past few years, I've been very health conscious.

The phrase 'Some past few years' is incorrect; it should be 'For the past few years'. Also, present perfect tense 'I've been' is appropriate to express an ongoing state. Correct preposition and tense usage improve sentence correctness.

× I like to follow a good Thai tallied.

✓ I like to follow a good Thai diet.

'Thai tallied' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'Thai diet'. Correct noun use is necessary for clarity.

× I tangled access room.

✓ I have access to a gym.

'I tangled access room' is incorrect and unclear. It likely means 'I have access to a gym' or 'exercise room'. Correct verb and noun usage are necessary.

× Mostly nowadays I like to read the articles on health by different doctors and the model that I like to read although information the news on online platforms.

✓ Nowadays, I mostly like to read articles on health by different doctors and models. I also like to read information and news on online platforms.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'the model that I like to read although information the news'. It is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun and article use.

× I think there's not a huge difference between rating online and reading on paper.

✓ I think there's not a huge difference between reading online and reading on paper.

'Rating online' is a typo and should be 'reading online'. Also, 'reading on paper' is correct. Correct verb use is necessary.

× The reading and the structure is quite seem which I think the difference between vote would be it is on screen and requires you know more or.

✓ The reading and the structure seem quite similar, which I think is the difference. The main difference would be that it is on screen and requires, you know, more effort.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Is quite seem' is wrong; it should be 'seem quite similar'. 'Difference between vote' is unclear; corrected to 'which I think is the difference'. Proper verb agreement and clearer phrasing are needed.

× You know more. Don't pull attention then reading on books.

✓ You know, it requires more concentration than reading books.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Don't pull attention then reading on books' is corrected to 'it requires more concentration than reading books'. Proper pronoun and verb use improve clarity.