电子书— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and structured by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence. For example, explain why you prefer paper books with clear reasons and examples.

範例: I prefer paper books to e-books because I enjoy the tactile feeling of turning pages. Moreover, paper books help me memorise information better since I can physically interact with the text. For instance, I often highlight important points, which aids my learning.

建議: Focus on clarity and sentence completion. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples of when you read online.

範例: I usually read online when I need to find information quickly, especially for important topics. For example, if I want to research a subject for work or study, I find online resources more convenient than visiting a library.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better organised. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons and examples.

範例: Yes, I will definitely read more online in the future because it offers easy access to a wide range of materials. Additionally, reading online is environmentally friendly since it reduces the need for paper, helping to save trees.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide more specific examples.

範例: I like to read medical articles and research online because, as a nurse, it's important to stay updated. For example, I often read about new treatments and medications to improve my knowledge and patient care.

建議: Try to organise your answer more clearly by comparing the two methods directly. Use linking words to contrast advantages and disadvantages, and avoid vague phrases like 'lots of disturbance'. Provide specific examples to support your points.

範例: Reading online is convenient because I can access information anywhere using my phone, such as when travelling on the subway. However, paper books allow me to highlight key points easily, which helps me memorise better. On the other hand, reading on screens can be distracting due to notifications or glare.

× Nowadays there's a turn around the world, most people have access ebooks and some of them like to ebooks, but I'm not a person who likes, uh, these kinds of, umm, books because, uh, I can't touch, uh, different paper of this, uh, books and also paper and printed book is really, uh, important for me because I can memorize.

✓ Nowadays there's a turn around the world, most people have access to ebooks and some of them like ebooks, but I'm not a person who likes these kinds of books because I can't touch the different paper of these books and also paper and printed books are really important for me because I can memorise.

The phrase 'have access ebooks' is missing the preposition 'to' which is necessary after 'access'. Also, 'like to ebooks' is incorrect; it should be 'like ebooks' without 'to'. The phrase 'different paper of this books' should be 'the different paper of these books' to correctly use the definite article and plural form. 'Paper and printed book is' should be 'paper and printed books are' to agree in number with the plural subject. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× When I have an important something to, especially when I want search lots of thing, I prefer to read online because I can get lots of information in the billing of and it's really convenient for me rather than to go to library and look for a specific book and find a specific subject when we can, when we.

✓ When I have something important to do, especially when I want to search for lots of things, I prefer to read online because I can get lots of information easily and it's really convenient for me rather than going to the library to look for a specific book or find a specific subject.

The phrase 'an important something' is awkward; 'something important' is the correct order. 'Want search lots of thing' lacks 'to' and plural form; it should be 'want to search for lots of things'. 'In the billing of' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'easily' for clarity. 'Rather than to go to library' should be 'rather than going to the library' to use the gerund after 'rather than' and include the definite article 'the' before 'library'. These changes correct quantifier use and improve sentence structure.

× To answer your question, definitely I will read online because lots of materials and resources are available on online source and it's really convenient and comfortable for me. So I will decided to read online. The other thing that I like to mention, there's a concerning issue around the world, we have to cut down lots of trees to produce paper.

✓ To answer your question, definitely I will read online because lots of materials and resources are available on online sources and it's really convenient and comfortable for me. So I have decided to read online. The other thing that I would like to mention is that there's a concerning issue around the world: we have to cut down lots of trees to produce paper.

'I will decided' is incorrect; the modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form 'decide' or use present perfect 'have decided' to indicate a decision made. 'On online source' should be plural 'on online sources' for accuracy. 'I like to mention' is better expressed as 'I would like to mention' to show politeness and intention. Adding 'is that' after 'mention' clarifies the sentence structure. These corrections improve modal verb usage and sentence clarity.

× There are lots of subjects I like to read online. For instance, in my workplace, since I work as a nurse, it's really important for us to be up to date, updated, so it I get lots of information about my jobs and I can get new research and new treatment, new medication.

✓ There are lots of subjects I like to read online. For instance, in my workplace, since I work as a nurse, it's really important for us to be up to date, so I get lots of information about my job and I can get new research, new treatments, and new medication.

The phrase 'to be up to date, updated' is redundant; 'to be up to date' is sufficient. 'So it I get' is incorrect; it should be 'so I get'. 'My jobs' should be singular 'my job' unless referring to multiple jobs. 'New treatment' should be plural 'new treatments' to match 'new research' and 'new medication' for consistency. These corrections improve adjective and noun usage for clarity and correctness.

× Reading online is really convenient because you carry your cell phone and you have access to the Internet, so it's really comfortable to get information and read when you are on subway. And when you want to read by books, it's really comfortable for people to highlight key point and memorize them. There are lots of disturbance on screen, for instance.

✓ Reading online is really convenient because you carry your cell phone and you have access to the Internet, so it's really comfortable to get information and read when you are on the subway. And when you want to read books, it's really comfortable for people to highlight key points and memorise them. There are lots of disturbances on screen, for instance.

The phrase 'on subway' requires the definite article 'the' to become 'on the subway'. 'Read by books' is incorrect; it should be 'read books'. 'Highlight key point' should be plural 'highlight key points' to match the plural context. 'Memorize' is corrected to British English spelling 'memorise'. 'Lots of disturbance' should be plural 'lots of disturbances' to indicate multiple interruptions. These corrections improve preposition use and noun agreement.