电子书— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state your preference first, then explain with clear reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: I prefer paper books to e-books because reading on screens for a long time strains my eyes. Although paper books are less convenient to carry around, I find them more comfortable to read.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words and be specific.

範例: I usually read online when I start assignments or reports because I need to find relevant textbooks and resources. Online materials are convenient and up-to-date for my studies.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Focus on expressing your ideas clearly with correct sentence structure and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and be specific.

範例: I will read more online in the future, even though my eyes get tired from screens. I plan to limit my reading time because online resources are plentiful and always up-to-date.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat repetitive. Try to clearly state what you like to read online and why, using linking words and correct grammar to make your answer coherent and natural.

範例: I like to read news and other relevant resources online because they are usually very up-to-date and easy to access.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to fully answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain differences between reading online and on paper.

範例: Reading online is different from reading paper books because I don't need to carry physical books; I can access information on my phone anytime. However, reading on paper is easier on my eyes and feels more comfortable.

× I prefer it as paper book ebooks.

✓ I prefer paper books to e-books.

The phrase 'paper book ebooks' is incorrect because it mixes singular and plural forms and is unclear. 'Paper books' and 'e-books' are plural nouns and should be used correctly to express preference.

× When I read it at long time I will feel the eye very tight, but the paperwork doesn't have this problem.

✓ When I read for a long time, my eyes feel very tired, but paper books don't have this problem.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to reading, which is an activity. Also, 'the eye very tight' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'my eyes feel very tired'. 'Paperwork' is incorrect here; it should be 'paper books'.

× Although it's hard to carry it to outside.

✓ Although it's hard to carry it outside.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'outside'. The correct phrase is 'carry it outside'.

× It's quite unconvenient but it's make me feels comfortable.

✓ It's quite inconvenient but it makes me feel comfortable.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'feels' should be 'feel' after 'makes me'.

× When I need to, uh, start my assignments or report, I need to review some, uh, relevant, uh, resource so that I will raise online.

✓ When I need to start my assignments or reports, I need to review some relevant resources online.

The phrase 'raise online' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'review online' or simply 'online'. Also, 'resource' should be plural 'resources' to match the context.

× So there are some, uh, textbook or, uh, general resources from online.

✓ So there are some textbooks and general resources online.

'Textbook' should be plural 'textbooks' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'from online' is better expressed as 'online'.

× So I just usually read online and in this time.

✓ So I usually read online at this time.

The phrase 'in this time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for specific times.

× I think I will read more online in the future evens I my eye cannot read the screen too long time, but I will control the time there's 'cause I think the online have lots of resource so it's very up to date.

✓ I think I will read more online in the future even though my eyes cannot read the screen for too long, but I will control the time because I think online has lots of resources and is very up to date.

'Evens' should be 'even though'. 'My eye' should be plural 'my eyes'. 'Cannot read the screen too long time' should be 'cannot look at the screen for too long'. 'There's 'cause' is informal and incorrect; use 'because'. 'The online have' should be 'online has'. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources'.

× So I think online will become rates at the.

✓ So I think online will become more popular in the future.

The phrase 'become rates at the' is unclear and incorrect. A clearer expression is 'become more popular in the future'.

× I will read some about the news and uh, some relevant resource online because the these two results is basically is very up to date and is very convenient to get the information in the online.

✓ I will read some news and relevant resources online because these two sources are very up to date and it is very convenient to get information online.

'Some about the news' is incorrect; 'some news' is correct. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources'. 'The these two results' is redundant; use 'these two sources'. 'Is basically is' is redundant; use 'are'. 'In the online' should be 'online'.

× So raising ends online I didn't need to slip the paper or carry a book anywhere in outside I just using the phone to review the information on the browsers.

✓ So reading ends online, I don't need to flip the paper or carry a book anywhere outside; I just use my phone to review information on browsers.

'Raising ends online' should be 'reading online'. 'Didn't need' should be 'don't need' to match present tense. 'Slip the paper' should be 'flip the paper'. 'Anywhere in outside' should be 'anywhere outside'. 'I just using' should be 'I just use'. 'On the browsers' should be 'on browsers'.