电子书— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer paper books to e-books because, although e-books are easy to access online, reading them for a long time strains my eyes. Therefore, I find paper books more comfortable for extended reading.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and some awkward phrasing. Try to reduce hesitation and use linking words to make your response more fluent and coherent.

範例: I usually read online when I begin working on assignments or reports because I need to do research. Therefore, online resources are quite convenient for supporting my work.

建議: Your answer is clear but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid unnecessary fillers. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I think I will read more online in the future because online platforms provide up-to-date information, unlike paper resources. Additionally, online reading is more convenient since I don't have to visit a bookstore.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I usually read today's news and relevant resources for my assessments online because these materials are easily accessible compared to paper books.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some hesitation. Try to use correct tenses and reduce fillers. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: The key difference is that I don't need to carry physical books when reading online. I can do research anytime and anywhere using my phone, which is more convenient than paper books.

× I prefer the paper books than the ebook.

✓ I prefer paper books to ebooks.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'paper books' and 'ebook'. Also, the correct preposition to express preference is 'to', not 'than'. Additionally, 'ebook' should be plural to match 'paper books'.

× So even the ebook is very easy access in online.

✓ So even ebooks are very easy to access online.

The phrase 'easy access in online' is incorrect. It should be 'easy to access online'. Also, 'ebook' should be plural and the verb 'is' should agree with the plural subject 'ebooks'.

× However, I think when I read this long time I will feel my eyes get high.

✓ However, I think when I read for a long time, my eyes will feel strained.

The phrase 'read this long time' is incorrect; it should be 'read for a long time'. Also, 'my eyes get high' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'my eyes will feel strained' or 'tired'. The future tense 'will feel' should be placed correctly after the time clause.

× So I prefer read the paper book than the ebook.

✓ So I prefer reading paper books to ebooks.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'reading'. Also, 'paper book' and 'ebook' should be plural and the correct preposition is 'to', not 'than'.

× I usually read online when I start in to do assignments or, uh, report because, uh, during these kinds of the assessments, I need to, uh, do some research.

✓ I usually read online when I start to do assignments or reports because during these kinds of assessments, I need to do some research.

The phrase 'start in to do' is incorrect; it should be 'start to do'. Also, 'report' should be plural 'reports' to match 'assignments'. The phrase 'these kinds of the assessments' should be 'these kinds of assessments' without 'the'.

× So the online is quite convenient to get this kind of the, uh, resource to support my assignment.

✓ So online resources are quite convenient to get to support my assignment.

The phrase 'the online' is incorrect; 'online' should be used as an adjective or noun without 'the'. Also, 'this kind of the resource' is incorrect; it should be 'this kind of resource' or 'online resources'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× I think I will read more online in the future because the online have the up to date informations in the platform so it doesn't like the paper resource.

✓ I think I will read more online in the future because online platforms have up-to-date information, so they are different from paper resources.

'The online have' is incorrect; 'online platforms have' is correct with subject-verb agreement. 'Informations' is uncountable and should be 'information'. 'It doesn't like the paper resource' is incorrect; it should be 'they are different from paper resources'.

× I need to go to the uh bookshop to get the paper uh book so I think the online is convenient.

✓ I need to go to the bookshop to get paper books, so I think online is convenient.

'The paper uh book' should be plural 'paper books' without 'the'. 'The online' is incorrect; 'online' should be used without 'the'.

× I normally will read some of today's news and, uh, uh, relevant resource about my assessment because this resource is basically, uh, can come from online.

✓ I normally read some of today's news and relevant resources about my assessment because these resources basically come from online.

'Relevant resource' should be plural 'relevant resources' to match 'some'. 'This resource is basically, uh, can come from online' is incorrect; it should be 'these resources basically come from online'.

× I can access it very easy then paper book.

✓ I can access it more easily than paper books.

'Very easy' should be the adverb 'very easily'. 'Then' is incorrect; it should be 'than' for comparison. 'Paper book' should be plural 'paper books'.

× The key difference is I didn't need to uh, carry the physical books to outside so the online I can do the research any places anytime when I need.

✓ The key difference is I don't need to carry physical books outside, so I can do research anywhere anytime when I need to online.

'Didn't need' is past tense; present tense 'don't need' fits better here. 'The physical books to outside' is incorrect; it should be 'physical books outside'. 'The online' is incorrect; 'online' should be used without 'the'. 'Any places' should be 'anywhere'.

× So I just use the phone to search the information I want, but the paper is different.

✓ So I just use my phone to search for the information I want, but paper books are different.

'The phone' should be 'my phone' to indicate possession. 'Search the information' should be 'search for the information'. 'The paper' is vague; 'paper books' is clearer.