电子书— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid general statements and unnecessary filler.

範例: I prefer e-books to paper books because they are portable and convenient. For example, I can store hundreds of titles on my tablet and read on the commute without carrying heavy books.

建議: Give a clearer time frame and organize examples with a linking phrase. Use specific, natural phrasing and avoid vague expressions like 'any kind of'.

範例: I usually read online when I need up-to-date information, for instance in the mornings to check news headlines or during a health crisis to follow official updates about pandemics.

建議: Answer directly with a clear prediction and a reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition and grammar errors. Be specific about situations when you would read more online.

範例: It depends on the situation, but I expect to read more online for urgent or technical information. For example, if there is a security threat or a pandemic, I will follow official websites and news outlets to get accurate, timely updates.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence stating what you like to read, then add one or two specific examples with linking words. Remove hesitations and repeated phrases and use correct collocations (e.g., 'recipes' and 'ingredients').

範例: I mainly read practical content online, especially recipes and cooking tips. For instance, I often look up ingredient lists and step-by-step instructions or watch short tutorial videos when I try a new dish.

建議: Start with a clear comparison sentence, then present two specific differences using linking words like 'first' and 'second'. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and more precise vocabulary.

範例: Reading online differs from paper in several ways. First, e-books allow you to adjust font size and use instant search for unfamiliar words; second, paper books offer a tactile experience and are easier on the eyes for long reading sessions.

× As we know, nowadays technology is advanced day by day. I usually prefer ebooks so I can easily read anywhere, anytime, not have to carry a paper book with me.

✓ As we know, nowadays technology is advancing day by day. I usually prefer e-books so I can easily read anywhere, anytime and do not have to carry a paper book with me.

The original used 'is advanced' which is passive and unnatural here; the progressive active form 'is advancing' correctly expresses ongoing change (Present continuous). Also 'not have to carry' is informal negative; use 'do not have to carry' for correct subject-verb support and clarity. Hyphenate 'e-books' for consistency.

× Whenever I have a need that time, I usually read online, such as regarding any kind of news, serious threats, pandemics and so on.

✓ Whenever I need information, I usually read online, for example news about serious threats, pandemics and so on.

The phrase 'Whenever I have a need that time' is awkward and ungrammatical; simplify to 'Whenever I need information'. 'Such as regarding' is redundant; use 'for example' and list nouns in parallel form. This fixes sentence structure and improves clarity.

× You totally depend on the situation. To be honest, I do not like to read too much. But yes, whenever I need any kind of information that I might usually read through Internet such as the such as security threats, pandemic news and so on, which gives me a accurate information as comparison.

✓ It totally depends on the situation. To be honest, I do not like to read too much. But when I need information I usually read it on the Internet, for example about security threats or pandemic news, which gives me accurate information for comparison.

'You totally depend' uses wrong pronoun; use 'It depends' for situations. 'Might usually read' is an incorrect modal combination; simplify to 'usually read'. Use 'on the Internet' not 'through Internet'. Remove duplicate 'the such as'. 'a accurate' should be 'accurate' (no article) or 'an accurate' if singular; here use 'accurate information'. These changes correct modal and article usage and prepositions.

× Whenever I need any kind of information that I might be usually read online as well as uh, whenever I need to know about any kind of recipes for the dishes so so that time, I usually read the ingredient as well as the recipes through online because I can easily cook as well as with the help of Internet I can.

✓ Whenever I need information I usually read online. For example, when I want recipes, I read ingredients and instructions online because I can easily cook with the help of the Internet.

The original has ungrammatical structure 'that I might be usually read online' mixing modal, passive/progressive and base forms. Use simple present 'I usually read online'. 'Recipes for the dishes so so that time' is redundant; simplify. Use 'instructions' rather than repeating 'recipes'. Preposition 'on/online' is correct; 'through online' is incorrect. These corrections fix verb form and sentence clarity.

× There are a lot of difference between reading online and reading a paper book. Firstly, in ebooks we can easily adjust the font as well as we can search immediately if we do not know about the word meaning. But from the paper book we have to highlight as well as we have to carry the paper.

✓ There are a lot of differences between reading online and reading a paper book. Firstly, in e-books we can easily adjust the font and search immediately if we do not know a word's meaning. But with a paper book we have to highlight and carry it.

'A lot of difference' should be plural 'a lot of differences' to match 'are'. 'In ebooks' is acceptable but hyphenated 'e-books' preferred. 'Search immediately if we do not know about the word meaning' is awkward; use 'search immediately if we do not know a word's meaning'. 'But from the paper book' is incorrect preposition; use 'with a paper book' and replace repetition 'we have to highlight as well as we have to carry the paper' with concise parallel verbs and pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy.