科学— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' properly to connect your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'definitely' twice. Try to give specific examples of what you enjoyed in science.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed studying science at school because it gave me both theoretical knowledge and practical experience. For example, I learned about plants, animals, and the environment through experiments, which made the subject interesting and easy to understand.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain clearly how you use science knowledge daily. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect your ideas. Avoid vague phrases and be specific about your daily use of science.

範例: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily. For example, I apply environmental knowledge to protect plants from harsh weather and prevent diseases. Also, I use health science to take care of my family’s well-being.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to state the subject you want to learn more about directly. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your feelings. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'honestly speaking' and 'definitely' together.

範例: Yes, I would like to learn more about biology because when I was in ninth grade, I found it boring and did not focus much. Now, I realize its importance and want to understand it better.

建議: Your answer has good points but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to explain why science is important. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'science subject' instead of 'science objective'.

範例: Yes, it is important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand the environment, plants, and animals. For example, learning about human anatomy teaches us how our body functions, which helps in protecting our health.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and by using correct plural forms. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' to connect ideas. Try to be more specific about the programs you watch and what you learn from them.

範例: Yes, I enjoy watching many science TV programs. For example, I like National Geographic because it shows how animals survive in the forest. I also watch science and technology programs that introduce new products and inventions.

× Yes, definitely when I was at my school I definitely love to enjoy studying science subject because it not only provide profound theoretical knowledge but it also give us experience of a practical sessions.

✓ Yes, definitely when I was at my school I definitely loved to enjoy studying science subjects because it not only provided profound theoretical knowledge but it also gave us experience of practical sessions.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was at my school'), so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Love' should be 'loved', 'provide' should be 'provided', and 'give' should be 'gave' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, definitely when I was at my school I definitely love to enjoy studying science subject because it not only provide profound theoretical knowledge but it also give us experience of a practical sessions.

✓ Yes, definitely when I was at my school I definitely loved to enjoy studying science subjects because it not only provided profound theoretical knowledge but it also gave us experience of practical sessions.

The word 'science subject' should be plural 'science subjects' because it refers to multiple areas of science studied. Also, 'a practical sessions' is incorrect; 'practical sessions' should be plural without 'a'.

× Vertical years are doubts easily and learn about plants, animals as well as environment.

✓ Over the years, I cleared my doubts easily and learned about plants, animals, as well as the environment.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Vertical years are doubts easily' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and uses proper sentence structure.

× Vertical years are doubts easily and learn about plants, animals as well as environment.

✓ Over the years, I cleared my doubts easily and learned about plants, animals, as well as the environment.

The word 'environment' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the natural world in general.

× Also how it works and.

✓ Also, I learned how it works.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. The correction completes the sentence to convey the intended meaning.

× Of course, on daily basis I use science knowledge to exemplify.

✓ Of course, on a daily basis I use science knowledge to exemplify.

The phrase 'on daily basis' requires the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct: 'on a daily basis'.

× First of all, I think that I use environmental knowledge how to protect the answer from harsh environment and as well as from diseases.

✓ First of all, I think that I use environmental knowledge to protect the environment from harsh conditions as well as from diseases.

The phrase 'protect the answer' is incorrect; it should be 'protect the environment'. Also, 'harsh environment' should be 'harsh conditions' or 'harsh environment' with an article. The preposition 'to' is needed before 'protect'.

× Apart from this, I'll also use knowledge regarding the how to take care.

✓ Apart from this, I also use knowledge regarding how to take care.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'The how to take care' is incorrect; it should be 'how to take care'. Also, 'I'll' (future tense) is inconsistent with the present tense context.

× Honestly speaking, definitely there is a one science subject that I would like to learn more about it.

✓ Honestly speaking, definitely there is one science subject that I would like to learn more about.

The pronoun 'it' is redundant because 'one science subject' is already mentioned. Removing 'it' avoids repetition.

× I clearly remember that when I was in the ninth standard, I didn't put much pressure to study about biology.

✓ I clearly remember that when I was in the ninth standard, I didn't put much pressure on myself to study biology.

The phrase 'put much pressure to study' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'put pressure on oneself to study'. Also, 'study about biology' should be 'study biology'.

× I clearly remember that when I was in the ninth standard, I didn't put much pressure to study about biology.

✓ I clearly remember that when I was in the ninth standard, I didn't put much pressure on myself to study biology.

The preposition 'on' is required after 'pressure' when indicating who is under pressure. Also, 'study about biology' is incorrect; it should be 'study biology'.

× At that time I feel quite bored.

✓ At that time I felt quite bored.

The sentence refers to a past time ('at that time'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'felt' instead of present tense 'feel'.

× Yes, nowadays in the school days it is quite important for everyone to learn a science objective, because there are such principles regarding the environment, regarding the plants, animals.

✓ Yes, nowadays in school days it is quite important for everyone to learn science subjects, because there are many principles regarding the environment, plants, and animals.

The phrase 'a science objective' is incorrect; it should be 'science subjects'. Also, 'such principles' is vague; 'many principles' is more appropriate here.

× The major thing is to learn about our human body, human anatomy, how it's a function so that people can easily protect.

✓ The major thing is to learn about our human body, human anatomy, how it functions so that people can easily protect themselves.

'How it's a function' is incorrect; it should be 'how it functions'. Also, 'protect' needs an object; 'protect themselves' is appropriate.

× The major thing is to learn about our human body, human anatomy, how it's a function so that people can easily protect.

✓ The major thing is to learn about our human body, human anatomy, how it functions so that people can easily protect themselves.

The verb 'protect' requires an object; adding the reflexive pronoun 'themselves' clarifies who is being protected.

× Yes, definitely. I love to watch plethora of science television program.

✓ Yes, definitely. I love to watch a plethora of science television programs.

'Plethora' requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'program' should be plural 'programs' because 'plethora' implies many.

× First of all, I love to watch National Geographic, which is totally related to animal history, how they survive in the forest.

✓ First of all, I love to watch National Geographic, which is totally related to animal history and how they survive in the forest.

The sentence is missing a conjunction 'and' to connect the two related ideas properly.

× First of all, I love to watch National Geographic, which is totally related to animal history, how they survive in the forest.

✓ First of all, I love to watch National Geographic, which is totally related to animal history and how they survive in the forest.

The original sentence lacks the conjunction 'and' to connect 'animal history' and 'how they survive in the forest' properly.

× Apart from this, uh, I also, uh, watch, uh, science and technical program, which is related to what kind of products are launching.

✓ Apart from this, I also watch science and technical programs, which are related to the kinds of products being launched.

The sentence needs plural 'programs' to match 'science and technical'. Also, 'what kind of products are launching' is incorrect; it should be 'the kinds of products being launched'. The filler words 'uh' are omitted for clarity.