早餐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by linking ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'But it's a weekend. If I have time I just have bread and bacon or some yogurt,' you could say 'However, on weekends, if I have time, I usually eat bread with bacon or some yogurt.'

範例: During the week, I usually skip breakfast and just drink coffee and water. However, on weekends, if I have time, I usually eat bread with bacon or some yogurt.

建議: Your answer lacks coherence and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and improve vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'you know' and be more specific in your opinion.

範例: There is a lot of information online about breakfast. Some people say it is very important, while others disagree. Personally, I believe people should eat when they feel hungry, so breakfast is not always necessary.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words like 'breakfast' unnecessarily. Also, try to expand your answer with more specific details.

範例: Yes, there are differences. When I was a child, I always had breakfast because my mother cooked for us and encouraged us to eat. However, now I usually skip breakfast due to my busy schedule.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid short, fragmented sentences.

範例: No, I don't want to change my morning routine because I get up early, accomplish many tasks, and I really enjoy mornings.

× During the week I don't really have a breakfast, I'm just drinking coffee in the morning and one glass of water.

✓ During the week I don't really have breakfast, I'm just drinking coffee in the morning and one glass of water.

The word 'breakfast' is an uncountable noun when referring to the meal in general, so the article 'a' should be omitted. Saying 'a breakfast' is incorrect in this context.

× But it's a weekend.

✓ But it's the weekend.

When referring to a specific time period like 'weekend' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is used instead of 'a'. 'A weekend' would refer to any weekend, but here the speaker means the current or typical weekend.

× If I have time I just have bread and bacon or some yogurt.

✓ If I have time, I just have bread and bacon or some yogurt.

A comma is needed after the conditional clause 'If I have time' to separate it from the main clause for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× On the Internet there are lots of information, so some people are saying breakfast is really important.

✓ On the Internet there is lots of information, so some people are saying breakfast is really important.

The noun 'information' is uncountable and singular, so it should be used with 'is' instead of 'are'. 'Lots of' can be used with uncountable nouns, but the verb must agree in singular form.

× Some of people are saying you know, it's not, but I just think people have to eat whenever they feel like they are hungry and I don't think it's important.

✓ Some people are saying, you know, it's not, but I just think people have to eat whenever they feel hungry and I don't think it's important.

The phrase 'some of people' is incorrect; it should be 'some people'. Also, 'feel like they are hungry' is awkward; 'feel hungry' is the correct expression.

× I would say yes because when I was a child I always had breakfast because my mom cooked and wanted us to have a breakfast, but now I don't really have.

✓ I would say yes because when I was a child I always had breakfast because my mom cooked and wanted us to have breakfast, but now I don't really have it.

Again, 'a breakfast' is incorrect; 'breakfast' is uncountable here and should not have an article. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'it' clarifies the object of 'have'.

× No, I don't think I'm going to change my morning routine. I AM. I get up early, I do a lot in the morning and I love morning.

✓ No, I don't think I'm going to change my morning routine. I am. I get up early, I do a lot in the morning and I love the morning.

The phrase 'I AM.' is unclear and should be 'I am.' with lowercase letters. Also, 'I love morning' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'morning' to specify the time of day.