语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连贯性和细节。建议在回答时使用连接词，并稍微扩展说明，比如学习这些语言的原因或使用场合。

範例: I can speak Chinese and English fluently, and I also know a little Japanese because I have a Japanese friend.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇（"to to"），且表达略显简单。建议避免重复，使用更丰富的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think learning a new language is quite challenging because you have to master both vocabulary and grammar before you can speak it confidently.

建議: 语法错误较多，如"one of my cousin"应为"one of my cousins"，"I want you talk"应为"I want to talk"。建议加强语法练习，注意主谓一致和动词不定式的使用。

範例: I want to study Japanese intensively in the future because one of my cousins is Japanese, and I hope to speak with her fluently.

建議: 回答内容较好，但"It 'cause"不够正式，建议使用完整表达。可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

範例: I learn English because I want to communicate with my international friends. For example, I have a friend from America named Emily, and we often write letters to keep in touch.

× Yes, I think it's very difficult to to learn a new language because you need to learn both the vocabulary and the grammar, and then you can pick up a new language.

✓ Yes, I think it's very difficult to learn a new language because you need to learn both the vocabulary and the grammar, and then you can pick up a new language.

句子中出现了重复的“to”，属于多余词语，应删除一个“to”以符合英语语法规范。

× I want to have intensive study in Japanese because one of my cousin is Japanese.

✓ I want to have intensive study in Japanese because one of my cousins is Japanese.

“one of my cousin”中“cousin”应为复数形式“cousins”，因为“one of”后面应接复数名词。

× I want you talk with her fluently.

✓ I want to talk with her fluently.

句中“want you talk”结构错误，应为“want to talk”，即动词不定式形式，表示“我想和她流利地交谈”。

× It 'cause I want to communicate with my international friends, such as one of my friends from America called Emily.

✓ It's because I want to communicate with my international friends, such as one of my friends from America called Emily.

“It 'cause”是口语缩写，应改为正式的“It’s because”，以符合书面语规范。