语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để ý nghĩa được truyền đạt chính xác. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

範例: I can speak English and Vietnamese. English is important for my work and has helped me improve my quality of life by enabling me to earn a higher salary. Vietnamese allows me to communicate easily with my family and friends.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh các câu rời rạc.

範例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it is not my native language. When I started learning, I faced many challenges such as achieving fluency and speaking naturally.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giải thích lý do học tiếng Trung một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

範例: Yes, I plan to learn Chinese in the future because China is very important in the global economy. I believe speaking Chinese will help me get a higher salary and better job opportunities.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng các lý do học tiếng Anh.

範例: I learn English because it is important for my work and studies. When I speak English, I can communicate easily with artists while working in a foreign company. Also, learning English helps me travel around the world more easily.

× English is very important for my work's stories and it has made can improve quality of life with high salary and Vietnamese has made communication with my friends and my family.

✓ English is very important for my work and it has helped me improve my quality of life with a high salary, and Vietnamese helps me communicate with my friends and my family.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'has made can improve' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'has helped me improve' to express assistance in improving quality of life. Also, 'work's stories' is unclear and should be simplified to 'my work'. The verb 'has made communication' should be 'helps me communicate' to correctly express ongoing ability.

× Oh yes, I think it is difficult to learn on their language because it's in not a native language.

✓ Oh yes, I think it is difficult to learn another language because it's not a native language.

The phrase 'learn on their language' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted and 'their' is wrong here. It should be 'learn another language'. Also, 'it's in not a native language' is incorrect; it should be 'it's not a native language'.

× Show when I started at new language have many difficulties like. Fluencies or nature when I speak a new language.

✓ When I started learning a new language, I had many difficulties like fluency and naturalness when I spoke the new language.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Show' is unnecessary and 'started at new language' is incorrect; it should be 'started learning a new language'. 'Have' should be 'had' to match past tense. 'Fluencies or nature' is unclear; correct terms are 'fluency and naturalness'. The sentence needs to be combined properly.

× Oh yes, I will learn Chinese in the future because right now China is very popular and important in the rake an I think I can.

✓ Oh yes, I will learn Chinese in the future because right now China is very popular and important in the market, and I think I can.

The phrase 'important in the rake an' is unclear and likely a typo; it should be 'important in the market'. The rest of the sentence is acceptable for future tense.

× I have had some high salary and a good charge when I speak Chinese.

✓ I can earn a high salary and get good opportunities when I speak Chinese.

The original sentence uses 'have had some high salary and a good charge' which is incorrect. 'Charge' is not appropriate here; 'opportunities' or 'positions' is better. Also, 'have had' is past tense but the context suggests a general statement, so present tense 'can earn' is better.

× I learn English because it's very attention for my work and study.

✓ I learn English because it is very important for my work and study.

'Very attention' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'important' to express significance.

× When I heard English I can communicate easy with artist when I work in foreign company.

✓ When I hear English, I can communicate easily with artists when I work in a foreign company.

'Heard' should be 'hear' to match present tense. 'Communicate easy' should be 'communicate easily' as an adverb modifies the verb. 'Artist' should be plural 'artists'. 'In foreign company' needs an article: 'in a foreign company'.

× In addition I when I learn English I can travel in the work easily with a communique.

✓ In addition, when I learn English, I can travel for work easily and communicate well.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Travel in the work' should be 'travel for work'. 'With a communique' is incorrect; likely intended 'communicate'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.