语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意单复数和词形变化。

範例: I speak Chinese as my mother tongue and English, which I practice every day to improve my language skills.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用简单句表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯，具体说明学习语言的困难。

範例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult, especially if you live in a different country. You have to communicate every day, which can be challenging both in daily life and at work.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，明确表达学习语言的原因。

範例: Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but right now I am focusing on improving my English because it can help me get better job opportunities and gain more work experience.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱的问题，建议简化句子，明确表达学习英语的原因，并使用恰当的词汇。

範例: I learn English because I live in a different country and want more job opportunities. English also broadens my horizons and helps me learn about different topics.

× I speak Chinese as a mother language and I also speak English which I practice everyday because I really want to improve my languages skills and skill. English Abilitie.

✓ I speak Chinese as my mother language and I also speak English which I practice every day because I really want to improve my language skills and ability in English.

语言技能和能力是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。应使用单数形式“language skills”和“ability”。此外，“mother language”应为“my mother language”，表示“我的母语”。

× I speak Chinese as a mother language and I also speak English which I practice everyday because I really want to improve my languages skills and skill. English Abilitie.

✓ I speak Chinese as my mother language and I also speak English which I practice every day because I really want to improve my language skills and ability in English.

“everyday”是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词“every day”，表示“每天”。

× Yes, I believe it is difficult to learn the new language as specially if you lived.

✓ Yes, I believe it is difficult to learn a new language, especially if you live abroad.

“specially”是副词，意为“特别地”，此处应使用“especially”，表示“尤其”。另外，“the new language”应为“不特指的语言”，用“a new language”。“if you lived”时态不对，应为现在时“if you live”。

× Yes, I believe it is difficult to learn the new language as specially if you lived.

✓ Yes, I believe it is difficult to learn a new language, especially if you live abroad.

条件句中描述一般事实时，条件从句应使用一般现在时，而非过去时。

× If I live in a different country, I have to face the communication from every day.

✓ If I live in a different country, I have to face communication every day.

“face the communication from every day”结构不正确，应去掉“the”和“from”，改为“face communication every day”。

× It's how scary including the daily life of and also worker challenges.

✓ It is very scary, including daily life and work challenges.

“including the daily life of and also worker challenges”结构混乱，介词使用错误，应简化为“including daily life and work challenges”。

× Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but currently I mainly focus to improve my English ability because I it may help improve my future opportunity and enhance my experience at work.

✓ Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but currently I mainly focus on improving my English ability because it may help improve my future opportunities and enhance my experience at work.

“focus to improve”用法错误，应为“focus on improving”。“I it may help”多余“I”，应删去。

× Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but currently I mainly focus to improve my English ability because I it may help improve my future opportunity and enhance my experience at work.

✓ Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but currently I mainly focus on improving my English ability because it may help improve my future opportunities and enhance my experience at work.

“opportunity”应使用复数形式“opportunities”，表示多个机会。

× Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but currently I mainly focus to improve my English ability because I it may help improve my future opportunity and enhance my experience at work.

✓ Yes, I would like to learn other languages in the future, but currently I mainly focus on improving my English ability because it may help improve my future opportunities and enhance my experience at work.

“focus”后应接介词“on”，构成短语“focus on”。

× I learn English because now I am living in a different country and I would like to have a more opportunity to work and also English.

✓ I learn English because now I am living in a different country and I would like to have more opportunities to work and also improve my English.

“a more opportunity”错误，应为“more opportunities”，表示更多的机会。

× I learn English because now I am living in a different country and I would like to have a more opportunity to work and also English.

✓ I learn English because now I am living in a different country and I would like to have more opportunities to work and also improve my English.

句子结构不完整，“and also English”缺少谓语，应补充“improve my English”。

× It brings me a broaden horizon, two different topics over knowledges and also helping make.

✓ It broadens my horizon, provides knowledge on different topics, and also helps me improve.

“a broaden horizon”应为“broaden”动词形式，“broaden my horizon”。“two different topics over knowledges”表达不清，应改为“provides knowledge on different topics”。“helping make”结构错误，应为“helps me improve”。