语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。質問に直接答えた後、具体的な例を簡潔に述べるようにしましょう。また、文の構造を整理し、自然な英語表現を心がけてください。

範例: I can speak Japanese and English. I was born in Japan, so Japanese is my native language. I use English sometimes for work, especially at international conferences where I gather important information.

建議: 文法の誤りが目立ち、表現がやや不自然です。比較表現や理由を述べる際は、正しい文法を使い、簡潔にまとめることが大切です。接続詞を使って論理的に話をつなげましょう。

範例: Yes, I think learning English is difficult for me because its grammar and sentence structure are very different from Japanese. Moreover, English pronunciation is challenging since it has many sounds that do not exist in Japanese.

建議: 話が少し混乱しており、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。話す前に内容を整理し、明確で簡潔な文章を作る練習をしましょう。また、不要な言葉（uhなど）は避けてください。

範例: Yes, I want to learn Spanish or French because they are widely used in international organizations like the United Nations. Also, I hope to communicate with many people in European countries.

建議: 回答が少し不自然で、文法的な誤りもあります。理由を述べる際は、主語と動詞を明確にし、具体的な例を簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I learn English because it is an essential tool to communicate with people worldwide. For example, when I cover international conferences like COP or G20, I need to use English effectively.

× I sometimes use English for a business purpose because I am a journalist and I won't have to talk with many people all around the world.

✓ I sometimes use English for business purposes because I am a journalist and I have to talk with many people all around the world.

The phrase 'a business purpose' is incorrect; it should be 'business purposes' to indicate general use. Also, 'won't have to talk' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'have to talk' to express necessity. The verb form 'won't have to' is a modal verb usage error (ID 4), but since only errors in the provided list are corrected, this is adjusted accordingly.

× For example, international conferences are very important opportunity to get information, so I use English there.

✓ For example, international conferences are a very important opportunity to get information, so I use English there.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very important opportunity'. This is an article error (ID 22). Also, 'opportunity' is singular and needs an article.

× Especially studying English is a very difficult for me because the structure and the grammar is very difficult from that Japanese.

✓ Especially studying English is very difficult for me because the structure and the grammar are very different from Japanese.

The phrase 'a very difficult' is incorrect because 'difficult' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a' without a noun. Also, 'is very difficult from that Japanese' is incorrect; it should be 'are very different from Japanese' to correctly compare and agree in number.

× Especially studying English is a very difficult for me because the structure and the grammar is very difficult from that Japanese.

✓ Especially studying English is very difficult for me because the structure and the grammar are very different from Japanese.

The subject 'structure and the grammar' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× In addition to that, the pronunciation is a much more difficult than a Japanese because there are a lot of sounds which I can't see in Japanese.

✓ In addition to that, the pronunciation is much more difficult than Japanese because there are a lot of sounds which I can't hear in Japanese.

The phrase 'a much more difficult' is incorrect; 'much more difficult' is correct without 'a'. Also, 'a Japanese' is incorrect; it should be just 'Japanese' as an uncountable noun here. Additionally, 'can't see' is incorrect when referring to sounds; it should be 'can't hear'.

× Yes, I want to learn Spanish or French in the future because these two languages are often used in, uh, some international institutions such as the United Nations and WMO, Nor who I want to communicate with many people in the European countries.

✓ Yes, I want to learn Spanish or French in the future because these two languages are often used in some international institutions such as the United Nations and WMO, and I want to communicate with many people in European countries.

The phrase 'Nor who I want to communicate' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'and I want to communicate'. Also, 'the European countries' should be 'European countries' without 'the'. This is an incorrect conjunction use (ID 16) and incorrect use of the definite article (ID 17).

× Because speaking English is essentially a tool for me to communicate with many people in all over the world.

✓ Because speaking English is essentially a tool for me to communicate with many people all over the world.

The phrase 'in all over the world' is incorrect; 'all over the world' is the correct expression without 'in'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× When I have to cover stories about the interconference, such as the COP, G20 or others, we have to command this language.

✓ When I have to cover stories about international conferences, such as the COP, G20 or others, I have to command this language.

The pronoun 'we' is inconsistent with the subject 'I' in the sentence. It should be 'I have to command this language'. Also, 'interconference' is likely a typo for 'international conferences'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).