语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 문장이 다소 길고 연결어가 부족합니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 'and' 대신에 'also'나 'as well' 같은 연결어를 사용하여 더 자연스럽게 표현할 수 있습니다.

範例: I usually speak Korean with my family and friends. I can also use English for my studies, work, and social communication.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I find learning a new language difficult because it takes time and practice. Therefore, I try to find effective methods to study regularly.

建議: 답변에 중복과 비문이 있으며, 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 하고, 배우고 싶은 언어를 구체적으로 나열하며 현재 학습 상황을 자연스럽게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I want to improve my English and learn other languages like French, Spanish, and German. Currently, I am learning a little Spanish.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 이유를 명확히 하고, 자신의 의견을 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I learn English because it is essential for international communication. I have liked English since I was young, and I think it is a perfect language.

× I also learning Spanish a little bit now.

✓ I am also learning Spanish a little bit now.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The verb 'learning' is a present participle and needs 'am/is/are' before it to be grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'I am learning' instead of 'I also learning'.

× I'm really with it because when I learn new language it is too hard for me so I whenever I learn I have to find how to learn and how can I be frequent.

✓ I'm really struggling with it because when I learn a new language, it is too hard for me, so whenever I learn, I have to find how to learn and how I can become fluent.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues including missing prepositions, incorrect word order, and unclear phrasing. 'I'm really with it' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm really struggling with it'. 'New language' needs an article 'a'. The phrase 'how can I be frequent' is incorrect; it should be 'how I can become fluent'. Suggestions: Use proper prepositions, articles, and word order to clarify meaning.

× I usually speak Korean to talk to my family and my friends, and I can also use English for my study and work and social communication.

✓ I usually speak Korean when talking to my family and my friends, and I can also use English for my studies, work, and social communication.

The phrase 'to talk to' is better expressed as 'when talking to' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'for my study' should be pluralized to 'for my studies' to correctly refer to academic activities. Suggestion: Use 'when talking to' and pluralize 'study' to 'studies'.

× Yeah, I I want a mystery English and I wanna learn French, Spanish, German like etc.

✓ Yeah, I want to master English and I want to learn French, Spanish, German, etc.

The phrase 'I want a mystery English' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended to say 'I want to master English'. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. The phrase 'like etc.' is redundant; 'etc.' alone suffices. Suggestion: Use clear verbs and avoid informal contractions in formal contexts.

× Because it's essential for international communication and I like English when I since I was young.

✓ Because it's essential for international communication and I have liked English since I was young.

The phrase 'I like English when I since I was young' is ungrammatical. 'Since' requires the present perfect tense 'have liked' to indicate an action starting in the past and continuing to present. Also, 'when' is unnecessary here. Suggestion: Use present perfect tense with 'since' and remove 'when'.