语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: A válaszod természetes, de néhány mondat ismétlődő és kissé zavaros. Próbálj meg egyértelműbb és tömörebb lenni, kerüld az ismétléseket, és használj összekötő szavakat a mondatok között, hogy gördülékenyebb legyen a beszéd.

範例: I can speak several languages, including Chinese, English, and Hungarian, and I am currently learning Italian. I have been studying these languages for many years because I believe that learning languages opens many doors for the future.

建議: A válaszod jó, de van néhány ismétlés és kisebb nyelvtani hiba. Használj összekötő szavakat, például "because" vagy "however", hogy a mondatok logikusabbak legyenek, és ügyelj a nyelvtani helyességre.

範例: I think it depends on your age. If you start learning a language at an early age, it is easier because children have better memory and are more willing to speak. However, learning as an adult can be more difficult.

建議: A válaszod tartalmaz néhány nyelvtani hibát és kifejezési pontatlanságot. Próbálj meg világosabb mondatokat alkotni, és használj összekötő szavakat, hogy a gondolatmenet folyékonyabb legyen.

範例: Yes, I will. If I had to choose one, I would say Japanese because I am interested in Japanese culture. The language has unique features that I admire, and I also appreciate their manners. Therefore, I think learning Japanese is the best choice for me.

建議: A válaszod érthető, de néhány mondat összetett és kissé zavaros. Használj világosabb szerkezeteket és pontosabb szavakat, például "goal" vagy "skill" a "object" helyett, és kerüld az ismétléseket.

範例: The main reason I am learning English is that it is a global language used everywhere. Most jobs require English certificates, so it is important for me to improve my skills to get a well-paid and promising job.

× I learn.

✓ I am learning.

The sentence 'I learn.' is grammatically correct but sounds unnatural in this context. The student is talking about an ongoing action, so the present continuous tense 'I am learning.' is more appropriate to express an action happening currently.

× If you start a language at an at an early age, then it would be easy for you because kids usually have better memory skills and they're willing to speak it out loud.

✓ If you start learning a language at an early age, then it would be easy for you because kids usually have better memory skills and they're willing to speak it out loud.

The phrase 'start a language' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'start learning a language'. Also, the repeated phrase 'at an at an' is a typographical error. The preposition 'at' is correctly used before 'an early age'.

× However, if you study a new language as a adult, then it would be more difficult and harder for you.

✓ However, if you study a new language as an adult, then it would be more difficult and harder for you.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'adult'. The correct article is 'an'.

× If I had to choose one I would say Japanese because I'm into Japanese cultural and the language has unique features which I really admire and I appreciate their manners.

✓ If I had to choose one I would say Japanese because I'm into Japanese culture and the language has unique features which I really admire and I appreciate their manners.

The word 'cultural' is an adjective and incorrect here; the noun 'culture' should be used after 'Japanese' to correctly express the meaning.

× So I think this is the best option I have ever made that I really want to learn in Japanese.

✓ So I think this is the best option I have ever made; I really want to learn Japanese.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The phrase 'that I really want to learn in Japanese' is incorrect. It should be split into two sentences or connected properly. Also, 'learn in Japanese' is incorrect; it should be 'learn Japanese'.

× The main reason I'm learning English is because it's the global language, I can use it everywhere and most of the jobs require English certificates.

✓ The main reason I'm learning English is that it's the global language; I can use it everywhere and most jobs require English certificates.

The phrase 'is because' is often considered incorrect or informal; 'is that' is preferred in formal English. Also, 'most of the jobs' should be 'most jobs' for natural expression.

× So it's important for me because I really want to get well paid and promising job.

✓ So it's important for me because I really want to get a well-paid and promising job.

The phrase 'well paid' should be hyphenated as 'well-paid' when used as an adjective before a noun. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'well-paid and promising job'.

× So English is a crucial object for me.

✓ So English is crucial for me.

The word 'object' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'crucial for me'. The preposition 'for' is used to indicate importance to someone.