语言— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır ancak dilbilgisi hataları, tekrarlar ve belirsiz ifadeler var. Daha doğal ve akıcı olmak için: 1) Cümleleri daha düzgün yapıya kavuşturun (örn. “I can speak…”). 2) Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ("a range, a big range" gibi). 3) Detay verin: dil seviyenizi ve nereden öğrendiğinizi belirtin. Örnek bağlantı sözcükleri kullanın (e.g., “and”, “also”, “because”). 4) Maksimum 3-5 cümle içinde kalın.

範例: I can speak Turkish and Armenian fluently, and I also speak English at an intermediate level and a little French. I studied these languages at school and by watching films and speaking with friends. Currently, I’m improving my English by taking online courses.

建議: Cevapta fikir açık fakat anlatımda çok sayıda dilbilgisi hatası, belirsiz zamir kullanımı ve tekrarlar var. Daha ikna edici olmak için: 1) Konuyu doğrudan ifade eden bir konu cümlesi kullanın (örn. “Yes, I do.”). 2) Neden zor olduğunu mantıklı ve spesifik örneklerle açıklayın (ör. kelime dağarcığı, telaffuz, pratik eksikliği). 3) Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın (because, so, for example). 4) Tekrarlardan kaçının ve 2-4 cümlede tamamlayın.

範例: Yes, I do. I find learning a new language difficult because I’m not used to its sounds and vocabulary, so I struggle with pronunciation and understanding. For example, when I first heard French, the pronunciation seemed very different from Turkish, which made me feel less confident.

建議: Cevap olumlu fakat tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha güçlü bir cevap için: 1) Kısa ve net bir başlangıç cümlesi kullanın ("Yes, I will"). 2) Neden öğrenmek istediğinizi spesifik olarak belirtin (kariyer, seyahat, kültür). 3) Hangi dilleri öğrenmek istediğinizi ve nasıl öğreneceğinizi ekleyin. 4) 2-4 cümleyle sınırlı kalın ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

範例: Yes, I will. I plan to learn Chinese and Spanish because they are useful for travel and work opportunities. I’m going to use language apps and attend conversation classes to improve my speaking skills.

建議: Cevapta niyet anlaşılır ama karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları var; ayrıca son cümlede konu İngilizceden Çinceye kayıyor ve mantık karışıyor. Daha etkili olmak için: 1) Doğrudan bir başlangıç yapın ("I learn English because..."). 2) Nedenlerini spesifikleştirin (iş, eğitim, iletişim). 3) Örnek verirken konuyu tutarlı tutun; İngilizce hakkında örnek verin. 4) 2-4 cümleyle kısa ve net yanıt verin.

範例: I learn English because it is an international language that helps me communicate with people from different countries. For example, I use English when I travel or when I study online, which makes it easier to access information and meet new people.

× Well, I can speak Turkish, Armenian, English and little French.

✓ Well, I can speak Turkish, Armenian, English and a little French.

Use 'a little' with uncountable nouns to indicate a small amount. 'French' as a language is treated as an uncountable noun, so 'a little French' is correct. Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'little.'

× I learned this from my school and I know I have a range, a big range of.

✓ I learned them at school and I know I have a wide range of languages.

The phrase 'learned this from my school' is awkward; use 'learned them at school.' 'A big range of' is incomplete; 'a wide range of languages' completes the idea. Also use 'at school' for where you learned languages.

× I think yes, I find it difficult to learn new languages because you are not used to talk that kind of languages and you never heard it and you feel unconfident and to you know, learn a new languages or umm used to be talk languages.

✓ Yes, I find it difficult to learn new languages because you are not used to speaking those kinds of languages, you have never heard them, and you feel insecure and unsure about learning a new language or being used to speaking one.

Several present tense and verb form issues: use 'speaking' (gerund) after 'used to' for habitual actions. 'Those kinds of languages' is correct plural form. Use present perfect 'have never heard them' for experience up to now. 'Unconfident' is not natural; use 'insecure' or 'unsure.' 'A new languages' is plural mismatch; use 'a new language.' Ensure consistent verb forms.

× Yes I I will learn other languages in the future because I don't want to get stuck with these 4 languages.

✓ Yes, I will learn other languages in the future because I don't want to get stuck with these four languages.

Main issue is numeric style: write 'four' in words in formal speech. The tense 'will learn' is correct for future plans. Also remove duplicate 'I.'

× I want to improve myself and learn the other languages which I don't know anything or I'm not used to that languages.

✓ I want to improve myself and learn other languages which I don't know anything about or am not used to.

Pronoun and preposition use: 'know anything' needs 'about' after it. 'Those languages' or simply 'other languages' is better than 'that languages.' Also after 'used to' use the verb or omit 'that languages.' Maintain pronoun and preposition agreement.

× I learn English because everybody needs to communicate with each other and languages is the key of the communicate.

✓ I learn English because everybody needs to communicate with each other and languages are the key to communication.

'Languages' is plural so use 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Key to communication' is the correct collocation; use noun 'communication' not 'the communicate.'

× If you don't know any languages you can't conversation with other.

✓ If you don't know any languages, you can't have a conversation with others.

Verb and noun choice: 'have a conversation' is correct. 'With others' is better than 'with other.' Also add comma after subordinate clause. 'Any languages' is acceptable; no change needed there.

× For example, I just wanna learn Chinese because I want to move Chinese and have communicate with them.

✓ For example, I just want to learn Chinese because I want to move to China and communicate with Chinese people.

Several preposition and verb issues: 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to.' 'Move Chinese' is incorrect; use 'move to China.' 'Have communicate with them' should be 'communicate with Chinese people.' Use proper noun 'China' and appropriate preposition 'to.'