生日— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What do you usually do on your birthday?
考生
On my birthday I seldom do anything special just because I personally see my birthday as a usual day so I just do my daily routine like go to school, do my homework and that's all.
考官
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
考生
Oh, when I was young, my parents usually gave me birthday gifts such as toys or comics or just some books. Additionally, they also bought me a birthday cake so I can sing song with my family.
考官
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
考生
Umm, not really, because I just see my birthday as a usual day, so it's not really essential for me to celebrate my birthday. I just want to make a small party with my families and my close friends.
考官
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
考生
I have no idea about celebrating birthday in China but I guess everyone birthdays should be celebrated because if only one have their birthday celebrated they would be happy.
評估
總分
Part 1
What do you usually do on your birthday?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng hơi ngắn và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên thêm các chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng các từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: On my birthday, I usually keep things simple. For example, I go to school as usual, but in the evening, I like to have dinner with my family. This way, I can enjoy a quiet celebration without much fuss.
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
分數: 75.0建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có sử dụng từ nối. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn bằng cách sử dụng các từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ.
範例: When I was young, my parents often surprised me with gifts like toys, comics, or books. Moreover, they always bought a birthday cake so that we could sing songs and celebrate together as a family.
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
分數: 70.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu đa dạng hơn và từ vựng phong phú hơn để làm câu trả lời hấp dẫn hơn.
範例: I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important because I consider it an ordinary day. However, I do enjoy having a small gathering with my family and close friends to mark the occasion.
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
分數: 60.0建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Although I'm not very familiar with birthday traditions in China, I believe that every person's birthday is important to celebrate. Celebrating birthdays can bring happiness and strengthen relationships among family and friends.
文法
× Additionally, they also bought me a birthday cake so I can sing song with my family.
✓ Additionally, they also bought me a birthday cake so I can sing songs with my family.
The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple songs typically sung during a birthday celebration. Using the singular form here is incorrect as it implies only one song, which is uncommon in this context.
× I just want to make a small party with my families and my close friends.
✓ I just want to have a small party with my family and my close friends.
The word 'families' is incorrect here because 'family' is a collective noun and should be singular when referring to one's own family. Also, the verb 'make' is not appropriate for 'party'; 'have' is the correct verb to use in this context.
× I have no idea about celebrating birthday in China but I guess everyone birthdays should be celebrated because if only one have their birthday celebrated they would be happy.
✓ I have no idea about celebrating birthdays in China but I guess everyone's birthday should be celebrated because if only one has their birthday celebrated they would be happy.
The noun 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' when talking generally. 'Everyone birthdays' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone's birthday' to show possession. Also, 'one have' is incorrect; it should be 'one has' to agree with the singular subject.
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