生日— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it could be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to make the response more coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'my birthday' multiple times, you can use pronouns or synonyms. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly with linking words like 'then' or 'after that'.

範例: I usually plan a party and invite all my friends. There is always a cake to celebrate, and then we spend the day laughing, chatting, and exchanging gifts.

建議: Your answer has a good structure and content, but the phrase 'more lively greatness' is unclear and unnatural. Try to use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas. Also, use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast past and present celebrations.

範例: When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my family by having a small party at home with cake and games, which made the day very special. However, nowadays I prefer to celebrate with my friends because I enjoy spending time with them and having a livelier atmosphere.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to form complete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, explain why you care about birthdays and how you organize celebrations.

範例: Definitely, I think celebrating birthdays is very important. I enjoy organizing parties not only for myself but also for my close friends and family because it helps strengthen our relationships.

建議: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Try to answer the question directly and avoid expressing confusion or frustration. If you are unsure, you can say so politely and provide a general opinion. Use simple and relevant vocabulary.

範例: I'm not very familiar with Chinese customs, but I think people usually celebrate birthdays of their family members and close friends as the most important.

× I usually plan a party on my birthday, so I gather all of my friends and definitely there will be a cake to celebrate my birthday.

✓ I usually plan a party on my birthday, so I gather all of my friends and there is definitely a cake to celebrate my birthday.

The phrase 'there will be a cake' is incorrect in this context because the sentence is describing a habitual action, so the present tense 'there is' should be used instead of the future tense 'there will be'.

× Then that day goes by laughing, talking to my friends, getting gifts and opening them.

✓ Then that day goes by with laughing, talking to my friends, getting gifts, and opening them.

The original sentence lacks a preposition to connect 'goes by' with the activities. Adding 'with' clarifies the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× Nowadays, I prefer to celebrate with my friends because I enjoy spending time with them and having more lively greatness.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer to celebrate with my friends because I enjoy spending time with them and having more lively fun.

The word 'greatness' is incorrectly used here as it does not fit the context. The adjective 'lively' should modify a noun that makes sense in this context, such as 'fun'.

× Definitely I do. I'm a huge birthday party girl so umm, I do care my birthday a lot or it's not specifically my birthday.

✓ Definitely I do. I'm a huge birthday party girl so umm, I do care about my birthday a lot, or it's not specifically my birthday.

The verb 'care' requires the preposition 'about' to correctly express concern or interest in something. Omitting 'about' is a grammatical error.

× My close friend is my family's birthday and I, I organize them all.

✓ My close friends' and my family's birthdays, and I organize them all.

The original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'friend' and 'birthday' when referring to multiple birthdays. Also, the pronoun usage is unclear. The correction clarifies possession and plurality.

× I think celebrating birthday is very special when it comes to relationships.

✓ I think celebrating birthdays is very special when it comes to relationships.

The noun 'birthday' should be pluralized to 'birthdays' to generalize the statement. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'birthday' if singular is intended, but plural is more appropriate here.