生日— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Жауабыңыз табиғи және түсінікті, бірақ кейбір сөйлемдерде грамматикалық қателер бар және сөздерді дұрыс қолдану қажет. Мысалы, 'I really like to celebrate my birthday always' орнына 'I always like to celebrate my birthday' деп айту дұрыс болады. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді қысқа және нақты етіп құрастырыңыз.

範例: I always like to celebrate my birthday by calling my friends. We usually go to the cinema or an aqua park. In the evening, I celebrate with my relatives at home.

建議: Жауабыңызда уақыт формаларын дұрыс қолдану маңызды. Мысалы, өткен шақта болған оқиғаларды сипаттағанда, барлық етістіктерді өткен шақта айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстыру үшін байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз.

範例: When I was young, my parents always surprised me at night and gave me gifts. In the afternoon, I invited my friends to visit me, and we celebrated my birthday together. We ate cake and had a lot of fun.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді дұрыс қолдану қажет. Мысалы, 'I've been waiting to this from year' орнына 'I have been waiting for this day all year' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді қысқа және нақты етіп құрастырыңыз, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it is a special day for me. I have been looking forward to it all year, and it makes me very happy.

建議: Жауабыңыз түсініксіз және грамматикалық қателер көп. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, ойыңызды анық және логикалық түрде жеткізіңіз. Мысалы, 'I think in China, people celebrate many birthdays, but the most important are traditional festivals for gods.'

範例: In China, people celebrate many birthdays, but the most important celebrations are for traditional gods. Every year, they honor these gods on special days with festivals.

× Actually, I really like to celebrate my birthday always.

✓ Actually, I really like to always celebrate my birthday.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the main verb 'celebrate' to correctly modify the verb phrase. In English, adverbs of frequency typically come before the main verb but after auxiliary verbs.

× we always go to cinema or Aqua parks

✓ we always go to the cinema or aqua parks

The noun 'cinema' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'Aqua parks' should be lowercase unless it is a proper noun. The plural form 'aqua parks' is correct if referring to multiple parks.

× at the evening I celebrate with my relatives.

✓ in the evening I celebrate with my relatives.

The correct preposition to use with parts of the day like 'evening' is 'in', not 'at'.

× My parents always made me surprise at night.

✓ My parents always surprised me at night.

The verb 'made me surprise' is incorrect. The correct past tense verb is 'surprised me' to indicate the action done by the parents.

× They always give me gifts and then in the afternoon I call my friends to visit me and we celebrate my birthday.

✓ They always gave me gifts and then in the afternoon I called my friends to visit me and we celebrated my birthday.

Since the question is about past events, the verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency.

× They give me presents and we ate cake.

✓ They gave me presents and we ate cake.

The verb 'give' should be in the past tense 'gave' to match the past context. 'Ate' is already correct past tense.

× Yeah, I think that my birthday is definitely important to celebrate because, uh, it's a special day for me and always I've been waiting to this from year and uh, I need to be very happy in this day and provide.

✓ Yeah, I think that my birthday is definitely important to celebrate because it's a special day for me and I have always been waiting for this day every year. I want to be very happy on this day and celebrate.

The original sentence has several structural and grammatical errors including incorrect prepositions ('waiting to this'), awkward phrasing ('from year'), and unclear meaning ('provide'). The correction improves clarity, tense consistency, and correct preposition usage.

× I think the whole person in China celebrate their birthdays, but actually maybe it will be some gods and they are really like him and every year they celebrate his birthday.

✓ I think all people in China celebrate their birthdays, but actually maybe it is some gods whom they really like and every year they celebrate their birthdays.

'Whole person' is incorrect; 'all people' is appropriate. 'It will be some gods' is awkward; 'it is some gods' fits better. Pronouns are corrected for agreement and clarity.