生日— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ lặp lại và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ thừa như "uh" và cải thiện cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn.

範例: On my birthday, I usually invite my friends to my house for a small dinner. We enjoy chatting around the table, and they always give me their best wishes, which makes me feel very happy.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngắt quãng như "uh" và "umm" để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các hoạt động trong ngày sinh nhật khi còn nhỏ. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và mở rộng câu trả lời một cách tự nhiên.

範例: When I was a child, I usually had a small birthday party with my family. We gathered together, ate delicious food, and my family gave me gifts like books, which I really enjoyed.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Honestly, I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important. If I have free time, I like to hang out with friends or have a small dinner with my family. However, when I am busy studying, I usually don't pay much attention to it.

建議: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không trả lời câu hỏi. Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp các chi tiết hỗ trợ để làm câu trả lời đầy đủ và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: In China, I think celebrating the birthdays of close family members, like parents or grandparents, is the most important because it shows respect and love for them.

× I usually invite my friend come to my house or like hang out to have a a small dinner together or we talk around the table and they give me the good wish for my birthday.

✓ I usually invite my friends to come to my house or hang out to have a small dinner together, or we talk around the table and they give me good wishes for my birthday.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the subject refers to multiple people. Also, 'good wish' should be plural 'good wishes' because it refers to multiple expressions of goodwill.

× I usually invite my friend come to my house or like hang out to have a a small dinner together or we talk around the table and they give me the good wish for my birthday.

✓ I usually invite my friends to come to my house or hang out to have a small dinner together, or we talk around the table and they give me good wishes for my birthday.

The verb 'invite' should be followed by 'to' before the verb 'come' to form the correct infinitive phrase 'invite my friends to come'. Also, 'like hang out' is informal and unnecessary here; 'or hang out' is sufficient.

× I usually have a small birthday party with my family members, uh, we gathering and uh, uh, eating together, umm, they give me a, a, a gift such as choice book or something like that.

✓ I usually have a small birthday party with my family members; we gather and eat together. They give me a gift such as a choice book or something like that.

'We gathering' is incorrect; the verb should be 'we gather' to match the subject and tense. Also, 'choice book' should be preceded by an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× we gathering and uh, uh, eating together

✓ we gather and eat together

The verb 'gathering' is incorrectly used here; the base form 'gather' is needed to match the simple present tense used for habitual actions.

× I usually have a small birthday party with my family members, uh, we gathering and uh, uh, eating together, umm, they give me a, a, a gift such as choice book or something like that.

✓ I usually have a small birthday party with my family members; we gather and eat together. They give me a gift such as a choice book or something like that.

The phrase 'such as choice book' is missing the article 'a' before 'choice book' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually have a small birthday party with my family members, uh, we gathering and uh, uh, eating together, umm, they give me a, a, a gift such as choice book or something like that.

✓ I usually have a small birthday party with my family members; we gather and eat together. They give me a gift such as a choice book or something like that.

The verbs should be in simple present tense to describe habitual actions: 'we gather' and 'we eat'.

× If I have the time, I will uh, I will hang out with my friend or have a dinner with my family, like a small party.

✓ If I have the time, I will hang out with my friends or have dinner with my family, like a small party.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of socializing with multiple people. Also, 'have a dinner' is incorrect; 'have dinner' is the correct expression.

× If I have the time, I will uh, I will hang out with my friend or have a dinner with my family, like a small party.

✓ If I have the time, I will hang out with my friends or have dinner with my family, like a small party.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because hanging out usually involves more than one friend.

× If I have the time, I will uh, I will hang out with my friend or have a dinner with my family, like a small party.

✓ If I have the time, I will hang out with my friends or have dinner with my family, like a small party.

The phrase 'have a dinner' is incorrect; 'have dinner' is the correct usage without the article 'a'.

× when I busy with studying, I will, I don't care about this.

✓ When I am busy with studying, I don't care about this.

The phrase 'when I busy' is missing the verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am busy'. Also, 'I will, I don't care' is contradictory; the correct form is 'I don't care' to express current attitude.