蛋糕— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples to enrich your response.

範例: Yes, I love eating cakes and other desserts. For instance, I enjoy currant cake, plum cake, vanilla cake, and sponge carrot cake because they each have unique flavors that I find delightful.

建議: Provide a clearer topic sentence and use linking words to explain your opinion. Also, try to be more specific about the cake's characteristics and why you didn't like it.

範例: Yes, there are traditional Chinese cakes, such as a soft and fluffy sponge cake. However, I didn't enjoy it much because its texture was too light and different from the cakes I usually prefer.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by linking your ideas more smoothly and avoiding repetition. Also, try to explain why you like baking or certain types of cakes.

範例: Yes, I can make cakes and baking is both my passion and hobby. Whenever I have free time, I experiment with new recipes, especially currant cakes, plum cakes, plain sponges, and cheesecakes, which I particularly enjoy because of their rich taste.

建議: Try to use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer clearer and more coherent.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed eating cakes as a child. During Eid festivals, we visited relatives and tasted various decorated cakes, which gave us new experiences and flavors from different households.

建議: Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to connect your sentences and provide specific examples of desserts you like after meals.

範例: Yes, I often have desserts after meals because they complete my dining experience. For example, I usually enjoy a small piece of chocolate cake or a fruit tart to satisfy my sweet tooth.

× Sweet thing is always my favorite but I really love having them.

✓ Sweet things are always my favorite but I really love having them.

The phrase 'Sweet thing' should be plural 'Sweet things' to match the plural pronoun 'them'. Also, the verb should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I eat almost all kind of cakes like currant cake, plum cake, vanilla cake, or a sponge carrot cake.

✓ I eat almost all kinds of cakes like currant cake, plum cake, vanilla cake, or a sponge carrot cake.

The phrase 'all kind of cakes' should be 'all kinds of cakes' because 'kinds' is plural when referring to multiple types. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It is usually a very soft and smooth well poured sponge which is a very fluffier as compared to our normal sponges.

✓ It is usually a very soft and smooth well-poured sponge which is much fluffier compared to our normal sponges.

The word 'fluffier' is a comparative adjective and should not be preceded by 'a very'. Also, 'well poured' should be hyphenated as 'well-poured' to function as a compound adjective. The phrase 'as compared to' is better expressed as 'compared to'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and adverbs.

× I usually prefer currant cake, plum cake, plain sponge as well as different type of cheesecakes.

✓ I usually prefer currant cake, plum cake, plain sponge as well as different types of cheesecakes.

The phrase 'different type of cheesecakes' should be 'different types of cheesecakes' because 'types' is plural when referring to multiple varieties. This is a singular and plural issue.

× When I was young, even on the festival of Eid where we are visiting our relatives, we ate different type of cakes that we have decorate.

✓ When I was young, even on the festival of Eid when we visited our relatives, we ate different types of cakes that we had decorated.

The phrase 'different type of cakes' should be 'different types of cakes' for plural agreement. Also, 'have decorate' is incorrect; it should be 'had decorated' to match past tense. This correction addresses singular/plural and past tense issues.

× When I was young, even on the festival of Eid where we are visiting our relatives, we ate different type of cakes that we have decorate.

✓ When I was young, even on the festival of Eid when we visited our relatives, we ate different types of cakes that we had decorated.

The phrase 'we are visiting' should be 'we visited' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'have decorate' should be 'had decorated' as past perfect tense. This is a past tense issue.

× It always gives us a new experience and a new taste from different houses.

✓ It always gives us new experiences and new tastes from different houses.

The nouns 'experience' and 'taste' should be plural 'experiences' and 'tastes' because multiple experiences and tastes are implied. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I really enjoy eating cake in my festival.

✓ I really enjoy eating cake at my festival.

The phrase 'in my festival' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for events. Also, 'cake' can be singular here if referring to cake in general, so no plural correction needed. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× I really enjoy eating cake in my festival.

✓ I really enjoy eating cake at my festival.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to festivals or events; 'at' is the correct preposition to use. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× I always tell my mom to make something sweet for me to complete my meal.

✓ I always tell my mom to make something sweet for me to complete my meal.

This sentence is grammatically correct with no singular/plural issues.

× I usually eat a small piece of dessert, but still it is important in my meal.

✓ I usually eat a small piece of dessert, but it is still important in my meal.

The sentence is mostly correct; only the adverb placement is adjusted for natural flow. 'Still' is better placed after 'but'. This is an incorrect adverb placement issue.

× I usually eat a small piece of dessert, but still it is important in my meal.

✓ I usually eat a small piece of dessert, but it is still important in my meal.

The adverb 'still' should be placed after the verb 'is' for correct adverb placement and natural sentence flow.