蛋糕— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy eating cakes and other sweet foods, especially French desserts. I believe I inherited this preference from my grandparents.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý cách viết tên lễ hội đúng.

範例: I'm not very sure since I'm Vietnamese, but I know that mooncakes are traditional Chinese cakes. People usually eat them during the Mid-Autumn Festival to celebrate with their families.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

範例: Yes, I can make some cakes, although I'm not an expert. I often bake cakes for my boyfriend because I enjoy putting my heart into them, and he always appreciates my efforts, even if the cakes don't look perfect.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, although I love sweets like cakes now, my parents didn't allow me to eat many cakes when I was a child because they thought it would harm my health.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I like to have desserts after meals because they help refresh my mouth. Usually, I choose fruits or light sweets as my dessert.

× I absolutely like to eat cakes or other sweet foods, especially French dessert.

✓ I absolutely like to eat cakes or other sweet foods, especially French desserts.

The word 'dessert' should be plural 'desserts' because it refers to a category of sweet foods, not a single item.

× I think I take that favor from my grandparents.

✓ I think I take that flavor from my grandparents.

The word 'favor' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'flavor' to express taste preference. Also, 'take that flavor from' is the correct phrase.

× moon cake is one of the Chinese traditional cakes

✓ mooncake is one of the Chinese traditional cakes

The word 'mooncake' is usually written as one word when referring to the traditional Chinese pastry.

× people often eat mooncake on mid autumn festival to enjoy the moon and the party together with the family.

✓ people often eat mooncake during the Mid-Autumn Festival to enjoy the moon and the party together with the family.

The preposition 'on' should be 'during' when referring to festivals or periods of time. Also, 'Mid-Autumn Festival' is a proper noun and should be capitalized.

× Yes, but it's not much.

✓ Yes, but not very well.

The phrase 'it's not much' is unclear and ungrammatical here. The intended meaning is likely about ability, so 'not very well' is more appropriate.

× I love the time I put my soul in the cakes and I love what my I love how my boyfriend appreciate what I make him until it's kind of ugly.

✓ I love the time I put my soul into the cakes and I love how my boyfriend appreciates what I make for him even if it's kind of ugly.

The sentence has pronoun errors and awkward phrasing. 'Put my soul in' should be 'put my soul into'. 'My I love how' is redundant and incorrect. 'Boyfriend appreciate' should be 'boyfriend appreciates' for subject-verb agreement. 'Make him' should be 'make for him'.

× No, although I love sweet such as cakes, but when I was a child my parents don't let me to eat to eat much cakes because it will paint mine too.

✓ No, although I love sweets such as cakes, when I was a child my parents didn't let me eat many cakes because it would harm my health too.

The sentence has multiple tense and grammar errors: 'don't let' should be past tense 'didn't let'; 'to eat to eat' is redundant; 'much cakes' should be 'many cakes' because 'cakes' is countable; 'paint mine too' is unclear and likely meant 'harm my health too'.

× No, although I love sweet such as cakes, but when I was a child my parents don't let me to eat to eat much cakes because it will paint mine too.

✓ No, although I love sweets such as cakes, when I was a child my parents didn't let me eat many cakes because it would harm my health too.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant and incorrect. One conjunction should be used to connect the clauses.

× I love sweet such as cakes

✓ I love sweets such as cakes

The noun 'sweet' should be plural 'sweets' when referring to types of sweet foods.

× That's after each meals.

✓ That's after each meal.

The phrase 'each meals' is incorrect because 'each' is followed by a singular noun; 'meal' should be singular.

× I always feel I have something fresh to clean my mouth.

✓ I always feel like I have something fresh to clean my mouth.

The phrase 'feel I have' is awkward; 'feel like I have' is the correct expression.

× I know how to say, but food is always my best choice after meals.

✓ I don't know how to say it, but food is always my best choice after meals.

The original sentence is unclear; likely the speaker means they don't know how to express it properly, so 'I don't know how to say it' is appropriate.