蛋糕— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda daha təbii və axıcı ifadələr istifadə etməlisiniz. "Umm" və "uh" kimi sözləri azaltmaq, fikirlərinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə etmək vacibdir. Məsələn, doğum gününüzdə hansı növ şokoladlı tortu seçdiyinizi daha dəqiq və sadə şəkildə izah edin.

範例: Yes, I like cakes, especially those with mixed chocolate. For my birthday, I usually choose a chocolate cake because it tastes sweet and delicious.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün qurmalı və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə etməlisiniz. Məsələn, "but" və "because" kimi sözləri düzgün yerlərdə istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha məntiqli ifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin.

範例: There were no traditional cakes like these before in my country. However, Napoleon cake is famous here. My mother likes it very much because she finds it delicious, but I don't like it that much.

建議: Cavabınızda təkrar və lazımsız sözlərdən qaçın. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurun. Məsələn, "uh" və "umm" kimi sözləri çıxarın və fikirlərinizi daha konkret ifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi məntiqli şəkildə əlaqələndirin.

範例: No, I am not good at baking cakes because I have never tried to learn. However, I am good at cooking and can manage the kitchen well since I live with my father.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və aydın qurun. "Not know what is really" kimi ifadələr qarışıqlığa səbəb olur. Fikirlərinizi daha sadə və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin. Məsələn, uşaqlıqda şirniyyat yeməyi necə sevdiyinizi və indi nə üçün sevmədiyinizi izah edin.

範例: Yes, my mother said that I really enjoyed eating sweets and cakes when I was a child. However, now I don't like eating sweets, cookies, or cakes very much.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar və qarışıqlıq var. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin. Məsələn, gündəlik həyatınızda yeməkdən sonra desert yemə vərdişinizi və hansı növ desertləri seçdiyinizi izah edin.

範例: Yes, I usually like to have some dessert or fruit after meals, especially after breakfast. However, I don't often eat desserts outside.

× I just like, umm, cakes with chocolate, especially mixed chocolate.

✓ I just like, umm, cakes with chocolate, especially mixed chocolates.

The word 'chocolate' here should be plural 'chocolates' because it refers to different types or pieces of chocolate mixed together. Using the plural form correctly matches the meaning.

× Yeah, that's why on my birthday I chose cakes with, uh, with the helping of the mating chocolates, because it's so sweet and delicious.

✓ Yeah, that's why on my birthday I chose cakes with, uh, the help of the melting chocolates, because it's so sweet and delicious.

The phrase 'with the helping of the mating chocolates' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'with the help of the melting chocolates'. 'Helping' should be 'help', and 'mating' is a wrong word here; 'melting' fits the context of chocolate.

× Actually not like this before because in my country, uh, be whatever people want to eat, they cake, they bake like these cakes, but Napoleon cake is famous here.

✓ Actually, it was not like this before because in my country, people bake whatever they want to eat, like these cakes, but Napoleon cake is famous here.

The original sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'it was' clarifies the sentence, and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, especially my mom like it very much because she says it's so delicious, but I don't like very much it.

✓ Uh, especially my mom likes it very much because she says it's so delicious, but I don't like it very much.

The verb 'like' needs third person singular 'likes' to agree with 'my mom'. Also, the pronoun 'it' should come immediately after 'like' for correct word order.

× No, I'm not good at baking cakes because I didn't try to learn, uh, baking cakes, but I know baking food.

✓ No, I'm not good at baking cakes because I haven't tried to learn, uh, baking cakes, but I know how to bake food.

The past tense 'didn't try' is less appropriate here; present perfect 'haven't tried' fits better to express experience up to now. Also, 'know baking food' is incorrect; it should be 'know how to bake food'.

× Uh, also I'm good at cooking food. OK, not much, but I can, umm, manage the station.

✓ Uh, also I'm good at cooking food. OK, not much, but I can, umm, manage the kitchen.

'Manage the station' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. 'Manage the kitchen' is a more appropriate phrase when talking about cooking.

× Yeah, my mom said that when I was child I really enjoy and I really enjoyed eating sweets and cakes, but not know like this.

✓ Yeah, my mom said that when I was a child I really enjoyed eating sweets and cakes, but now I don't like them like this.

'Was child' needs the article 'a' to be correct. 'Really enjoy' should be past tense 'really enjoyed' to match the past context. 'Not know like this' is unclear and corrected to 'now I don't like them like this'.

× I don't like eating sweeties, cookies or cakes very much. I don't know what is really.

✓ I don't like eating sweets, cookies, or cakes very much. I don't really know why.

'Sweeties' is informal and less common; 'sweets' is better. The second sentence is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'I don't really know why' to express uncertainty.

× Yes, I like to have some desserts after meals in a daily life.

✓ Yes, I like to have some desserts after meals in daily life.

The phrase 'in a daily life' is incorrect; the article 'a' should be removed to say 'in daily life'.

× Actually I don't eat out of desserts, but when I had a breakfast when I I after eat I will eat some desserts or fruits.

✓ Actually, I don't eat desserts outside, but when I have breakfast, after eating, I will eat some desserts or fruits.

'Eat out of desserts' is incorrect; 'eat desserts outside' is clearer. The sentence structure is confusing and corrected for clarity and proper tense usage.