蛋糕— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, clarify your preferences more clearly and avoid contradictions, for example, saying you hate chocolates but then mentioning chocolate cake later can confuse the listener.

範例: I love eating cakes because I have a sweet tooth, especially fruity cakes. However, I don't like chocolates very much.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question with a topic sentence and provide some supporting details if possible. Avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant information.

範例: Yes, there are traditional Chinese cakes such as mooncakes, which are popular during the Mid-Autumn Festival. They usually have sweet fillings like red bean paste or lotus seed paste.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to complete your sentences and explain your reasons clearly. Use correct grammar, for example, 'I know how to bake a cake' instead of 'I know how to baking a cake.'

範例: Yes, I can make cakes. I learned how to bake cakes because my mother taught me when I was young.

建議: Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words. Use correct grammar such as 'I enjoyed eating sweets' instead of 'I enjoying to eating a sweet.' Also, explain your favorite cake clearly and avoid unclear phrases like 'that's my flip.'

範例: Yes, I liked eating cakes as a child because I have a sweet tooth. My favorite cake was chocolate cake because it tastes rich and delicious.

建議: Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. For example, say 'I am keen on having dessert after meals' instead of 'keen on to having.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy having dessert after meals because it gives me a little energy. For example, I often choose fruit desserts because they are tasty, delicious, and refreshing.

× I love cakes because I have a sweet tooth and I enjoy eating sweet things. Uh, except uh, chocolates that I hate and I like the fruity ones.

✓ I love cakes because I have a sweet tooth and I enjoy eating sweet things. Uh, except uh, chocolates that I hate, and I like the fruity ones.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses, improving sentence clarity and correctness.

× I don't know exactly, but once I, uh, went to a Chinese restaurant and I eat wonderful.

✓ I don't know exactly, but once I, uh, went to a Chinese restaurant and I ate wonderfully.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the past action 'went'. Also, 'wonderful' is an adjective; the adverb 'wonderfully' correctly modifies the verb 'ate'.

× Yes I do, and the main reason that I know how to baking a cake is because my.

✓ Yes I do, and the main reason that I know how to bake a cake is because of my...

After 'know how to', the base form of the verb 'bake' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'baking'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× Yes, uh, my, uh, yes, I uh, because I have a, a sweet tooth and I enjoying to eating a sweet, especially cake and my favorite cake is a chocolate cake and umm, because, uh, that's my flip.

✓ Yes, uh, my, uh, yes, I uh, because I have a sweet tooth and I enjoy eating sweets, especially cake, and my favorite cake is a chocolate cake and umm, because, uh, that's my flip.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in base form followed by the gerund 'eating'. The phrase 'enjoying to eating' is incorrect. Also, 'sweet' should be plural 'sweets' when referring to sweet foods in general.

× Yes, I'm really keen on to having a dessert after meals and umm, it's feel a perfect, uh, way to uh, give a, umm, give me a little energy.

✓ Yes, I'm really keen on having a dessert after meals and umm, it feels like a perfect, uh, way to, uh, give me a little energy.

The phrase 'keen on' should be followed directly by the gerund without 'to'. Also, 'it's feel' is incorrect; it should be 'it feels'. The phrase 'feel a perfect' is better expressed as 'feels like a perfect'.