Part 1
考官
Do you use coins now?
考生
Well, actually I don't use coins anymore. I find that coins are a bit too worthless and too heavy, so I usually use paper money or just use my credit card instead.
考官
Is it convenient to use coins?
考生
No, I don't think so. Coins are a bit too heavy and it's sometimes slips out of your hand because it is too smooth, which makes counting them a bit difficult.
考官
Have you collected coins when you were a kid?
考生
Yes, I used to think US pennies and UK cents looks very wonderful and I collect US pennies and UK cents. I find collecting coins very relaxing.
考官
Do you carry coins when you go out?
考生
Yes, I sometimes carry coins when I go out, but I would only carry 5 coins at most because they are too heavy and too inconvenient. I use them only when the price looks very strange, such as CN¥11.
Do you use coins now?
分數: 75.0建議: 你的回答表达了观点,但用词如“worthless”不太自然,且有些重复。建议用更自然的表达方式,如“not very practical”或“inconvenient”,并避免重复“too”。
範例: No, I don't use coins much these days because I find them inconvenient and heavy. Instead, I prefer using paper money or my credit card for most purchases.
Is it convenient to use coins?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有语法错误,如“it's sometimes slips”应为“they sometimes slip”。建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式,同时用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: No, I don't find coins convenient because they are quite heavy and sometimes slip out of my hand since they are smooth, which makes counting them difficult.
Have you collected coins when you were a kid?
分數: 65.0建議: 时态使用不准确,“looks”应为“look”,且“collect”应为过去式“collected”。建议注意时态一致,并丰富细节使回答更具体。
範例: Yes, I used to collect US pennies and UK cents when I was a kid because I thought they looked fascinating. Collecting coins was a relaxing hobby for me.
Do you carry coins when you go out?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答较好,但“the price looks very strange”表达不够自然。建议用更地道的表达,如“when the price is an odd amount”。
範例: Yes, I sometimes carry a few coins when I go out, usually no more than five because they can be heavy and inconvenient. I mainly use them when the price is an odd amount, like CN¥11.
× I used to think US pennies and UK cents looks very wonderful and I collect US pennies and UK cents.
✓ I used to think US pennies and UK cents look very wonderful and I collect US pennies and UK cents.
主语是复数(US pennies and UK cents),谓语动词应使用复数形式look,而不是单数形式looks。
× I collect US pennies and UK cents.
✓ I collected US pennies and UK cents.
句子描述的是过去的习惯行为,应该使用过去时态collected,而不是现在时态collect。
× Coins are a bit too heavy and it's sometimes slips out of your hand because it is too smooth, which makes counting them a bit difficult.
✓ Coins are a bit too heavy and they sometimes slip out of your hand because they are too smooth, which makes counting them a bit difficult.
coins是复数,代词应使用they而不是it,动词也应使用复数形式slip而不是单数形式slips。