老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“always making drugs”应为“always making jokes”。建议注意动词形式和词汇的准确使用，避免表达错误。

範例: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school history teacher. He had a great sense of humor and always made jokes during class. His lessons were never boring, and he could make even the dullest topics interesting.

建議: 回答较为完整，但有重复词汇“some some”，且句子结构稍显冗长。建议注意句子简洁，避免重复，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: No, I haven't been in touch with my primary school teachers since I graduated over 10 years ago. However, I clearly remember their kindness and patience, which played a big role in my early education.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“helped me to standing out”应为“helped me stand out”，以及动词时态不一致。建议加强语法准确性，使用恰当的时态和动词形式。

範例: My teacher really helped me stand out and speak confidently in front of people. He usually encouraged us to share our opinions in class and made everyone feel comfortable doing so. I used to be shy, but his support really helped me improve.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“challenge challenging”。建议注意词汇选择和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Not really. I used to tutor some young students and found that teaching can be very challenging. It's not just about explaining things but also managing students, which I find quite difficult.

× He had a really good sense of humor and always making drugs during his class.

✓ He had a really good sense of humor and was always making jokes during his class.

句中动词短语缺少助动词，正确结构应为“was always making”，表示持续进行的动作。此外，原句中的“making drugs”意思不合适，应为“making jokes”表示开玩笑。

× His class was never boring and he could explain the dullest topic Interesting so.

✓ His class was never boring and he could explain the dullest topic so interestingly.

“Interesting”应改为副词形式“interestingly”修饰动词“explain”，且“so”应放在副词前面，形成“so interestingly”。

× No, I'm not still in touch with them anymore since I've graduated from my primary school more than 10 years.

✓ No, I'm not still in touch with them anymore since I graduated from my primary school more than 10 years ago.

“I've graduated”时态不合适，应使用一般过去时“I graduated”，且“more than 10 years”后应加“ago”表示时间点。

× But I can still remember some some of them clearly as their kindness and patience.

✓ But I can still remember some of them clearly for their kindness and patience.

“as”用法错误，应使用“for”表示原因或理由。

× My teacher really helped me to standing out and speaking in front of people.

✓ My teacher really helped me to stand out and speak in front of people.

动词“help”后接动词不定式时，动词应为原形，不能用动名词形式。

× He usually encourage us to speak and sharing our opinion in front of the class and make the make everyone feel comfortable about that.

✓ He usually encouraged us to speak and share our opinions in front of the class and made everyone feel comfortable about that.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s变为“encouraged”，且并列动词应保持一致的形式，使用原形“share”和“made”。

× I used to be shy but his attitude really helps me.

✓ I used to be shy but his attitude really helped me.

前半句为过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，使用过去时“helped”。

× I find out how challenge challenging teaching could be.

✓ I found out how challenging teaching could be.

“find out”应使用过去时“found out”，且“challenge”应为形容词“challenging”修饰后面的名词。

× So I feel teaching was not just explaining things but also managing people and the students.

✓ So I feel teaching is not just explaining things but also managing people and the students.

此句表达的是现在的感受，应使用现在时“is”而非过去时“was”。