老师— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
考生
Absolutely. My favorite teacher is Mr. Lee, my second grade English teacher. He is a funny person and usually made the play games to focus on.
考官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
考生
Yeah, I still in touch with my primary school teacher, for instance, my technology teacher, Mr. Huang, I would send message once a year during Chinese New Year.
考官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
考生
My English teacher named Mr. Lee would use his sense of humor to attract me and help me improve my English teacher knowledge. I respect him.
考官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
考生
Honestly I don't want to be a teacher as I think teachers usually have lower income. Honestly I prefer her to be a sales assistant because it offer higher salaries.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“made the play games to focus on”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。
範例: Yes, my favourite teacher is Mr. Lee, who taught me English in second grade. He was very funny and often used games to help us concentrate during lessons.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“still in touch”应为“still in touch with”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅自然。
範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers. For example, I send a message to my technology teacher, Mr. Huang, every Chinese New Year.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中表达不清晰，且有语法错误，如“improve my English teacher knowledge”不合适。建议明确表达老师如何帮助自己，并使用恰当的词汇。
範例: My favourite teacher, Mr. Lee, used his sense of humor to make lessons interesting, which helped me improve my English skills. I really respect him for that.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题，如“prefer her to be”应为“I prefer to be”。建议使用正确的语法结构，并表达清楚自己的职业选择理由。
範例: Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher because I think the salary is usually low. I would prefer to be a sales assistant since it offers higher pay.
文法
× He is a funny person and usually made the play games to focus on.
✓ He is a funny person and usually makes the play games to focus on.
句子中描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时态，'made'是过去式，需改为第三人称单数形式'makes'。
× Yeah, I still in touch with my primary school teacher, for instance, my technology teacher, Mr. Huang, I would send message once a year during Chinese New Year.
✓ Yeah, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher, for instance, my technology teacher, Mr. Huang. I send messages once a year during Chinese New Year.
缺少动词be动词'am'，导致句子结构不完整；'would send'表达习惯动作时不合适，应使用一般现在时'send'。
× I still in touch with my primary school teacher
✓ I am still in touch with my primary school teacher
短语中缺少be动词'am'，'in touch with'是固定搭配，需完整表达。
× Honestly I prefer her to be a sales assistant because it offer higher salaries.
✓ Honestly, I prefer to be a sales assistant because it offers higher salaries.
'her'用错，应该用不定式表达自己的意愿；'it offer'主谓不一致，'offer'应改为第三人称单数形式'offers'。
× Honestly I prefer her to be a sales assistant because it offer higher salaries.
✓ Honestly, I prefer to be a sales assistant because it offers higher salaries.
主语'it'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为'offers'。
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