老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating who your favorite teacher is and why. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, my favorite teacher is my English teacher because she teaches me many interesting things. Besides being a teacher, she is also like a friend, so we can talk openly and trust each other. This makes learning a great experience for me.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question and provide specific details about how you keep in touch. Use clear and simple language to express your ideas.

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. We often communicate through social media and sometimes meet during school events. This helps us maintain a good relationship.

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to directly explain how your favorite teacher helped you, using specific examples and linking words to make your response coherent.

範例: My favorite teacher helped me by being more than just an instructor; she acted like a friend. This made me feel comfortable to share my problems and learn better. For example, she encouraged me when I struggled with English.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is grammatically incorrect and a bit unclear. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your points.

範例: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because it is a rewarding job. Not only can I teach students knowledge, but I can also build friendships with them. This makes life more enjoyable and fulfilling.

× my favorite teacher always like English teacher because they can teach me a lot of different things

✓ my favorite teacher always likes English teachers because they can teach me a lot of different things

The subject 'my favorite teacher' is singular, so the verb should be 'likes' to agree in the third person singular form. Also, 'English teacher' should be plural 'English teachers' to match the context of 'they can teach me'.

× We can talk each other, heart with hearts and we can believe each other too.

✓ We can talk to each other, heart to heart, and we can believe in each other too.

The phrase 'talk each other' is incorrect; it should be 'talk to each other'. The expression 'heart with hearts' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'heart to heart'. Also, 'believe each other' should be 'believe in each other' to use the correct preposition.

× my primary school teacher have been taught me about for four years

✓ my primary school teacher has taught me for four years

The subject 'my primary school teacher' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'have been taught me about' is incorrect; the correct form is 'has taught me'. The preposition 'about' is unnecessary here.

× we have a lot of challenges and different membership to connect each other.

✓ we have a lot of challenges and different memberships to connect with each other.

The word 'membership' should be plural 'memberships' to match 'different'. Also, 'connect each other' is incorrect; it should be 'connect with each other'.

× Will my favorite teacher help me? They use another identity to talk with me.

✓ Will my favorite teacher help me? They use another identity to talk to me.

The phrase 'talk with me' is less common and 'talk to me' is more appropriate in this context.

× They use friend, this member, to talk to me.

✓ They use the role of a friend, this member, to talk to me.

The phrase 'use friend' is unclear; adding 'the role of a' clarifies the meaning.

× I think it's a great experience to get in touch with me and teacher.

✓ I think it's a great experience to get in touch between me and the teacher.

The phrase 'get in touch with me and teacher' is incorrect; it should express the connection between 'me and the teacher'. Also, 'teacher' needs the definite article 'the'.

× We can open our heart to talk more.

✓ We can open our hearts to talk more.

The phrase 'our heart' should be plural 'our hearts' because it refers to both people.

× Sure, might to be a teacher is my favorite dream because I think teacher is a great job and is a different job.

✓ Sure, being a teacher is my favorite dream because I think teaching is a great and unique job.

The phrase 'might to be a teacher' is incorrect; 'being a teacher' is the correct gerund form. Also, 'teacher is a great job and is a different job' is awkward; 'teaching is a great and unique job' is clearer.

× Why you can not only taught student knowledge but also can make friends with them and even can make you life younger.

✓ Because you can not only teach students knowledge but also make friends with them and even make your life younger.

The verb 'taught' is past tense but the sentence is in present tense; it should be 'teach'. Also, 'you life' should be 'your life'. The modal 'can' should be used consistently without 'can' repeated unnecessarily.