老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tập trung vào một giáo viên yêu thích và giải thích lý do cụ thể tại sao bạn ngưỡng mộ cô ấy.

範例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher because she always encourages me to improve my language skills. She is very patient and makes lessons interesting, which inspires me to learn more.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nội dung tiêu cực mà không giải thích cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cung cấp lý do hoặc cảm nhận một cách tích cực hoặc trung lập.

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. She was very supportive and helped me a lot during my early years at school.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: My favourite teacher helped me improve my interpersonal skills by giving personalized guidance and encouragement. She understood my strengths and weaknesses, and her constructive feedback motivated me to do better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm". Hãy trình bày lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: I don't want to be a teacher because it is a challenging job. Teachers need to be patient and supportive to help students grow and change their lives.

× They are a person who helped me a lot and during my school time, so I really appreciate them.

✓ They are people who helped me a lot during my school time, so I really appreciate them.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the complement should be plural as well. 'A person' is singular, which conflicts with 'They'. Changing 'a person' to 'people' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× It is she is my English teacher.

✓ She is my English teacher.

The phrase 'It is she is' is redundant and incorrect. The correct way is simply 'She is my English teacher.' This removes unnecessary pronouns and clarifies the sentence.

× when I was in primary school a teacher has partnered me so much and therefore I don't really like her.

✓ When I was in primary school, a teacher partnered me so much and therefore I didn't really like her.

The action happened in the past, so the past tense 'partnered' and 'didn't' should be used instead of present perfect 'has partnered' and present tense 'don't'. This aligns the verb tenses with the time frame.

× And still now I don't like her anymore.

✓ And even now I don't like her anymore.

The phrase 'still now' is awkward; 'even now' is more natural. Also, 'don't like her anymore' is correct in present tense to express ongoing feeling.

× My teacher helped me improve my interpersonal skill by providing me with a personalized guidance and encouragement.

✓ My teacher helped me improve my interpersonal skills by providing me with personalized guidance and encouragement.

'Interpersonal skill' should be plural 'interpersonal skills' because it generally refers to multiple abilities. 'A personalized guidance' is incorrect because 'guidance' is uncountable and does not take an article.

× She always took the time to understand my strength and weakness, offering constructive feedback that motivate me to improve.

✓ She always took the time to understand my strengths and weaknesses, offering constructive feedback that motivates me to improve.

'Strength' and 'weakness' should be plural to match the context. 'Motivate' should be 'motivates' to agree with the singular subject 'feedback'.

× So I really really appreciate them her and grateful.

✓ So I really really appreciate her and am grateful.

'Them' is plural and conflicts with 'her' which is singular; only 'her' is appropriate here. Also, 'grateful' needs a verb 'am' to form a complete sentence.

× I don't want to be a teacher in the future, uh, because I think that it is a hard work because, umm, you know, when you have to be a teacher, you have to sympathize with others and help a lot of umm, encouragement to make others can change their life.

✓ I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I think it is hard work. When you are a teacher, you have to sympathize with others and provide a lot of encouragement to help others change their lives.

'A hard work' is incorrect; 'hard work' is uncountable and does not take an article. 'Help a lot of encouragement' is incorrect; 'provide a lot of encouragement' is correct. 'Make others can change' is ungrammatical; it should be 'help others change'. The modal verb 'can' is unnecessary here.