老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda cümlələr bir az qarışıqdır və təkrarlamalar var. Daha aydın və qısa ifadə etməyə çalışın. Məsələn, mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və sonra dəstəkləyici məlumat verin. Həmçinin, qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I have a favourite teacher who taught English at my school. She was very supportive and always helped me whenever I needed assistance. Because of her encouragement, I decided to become an English teacher myself.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa edin, mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və səbəbi izah edin. Əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin ki, cavabınız daha məntiqli olsun.

範例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because I didn't have a cell phone back then, so I didn't save their numbers. However, I still keep in contact with my university teachers.

建議: Cavabınız yaxşıdır, amma daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və cümlələri daha qısa edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha dəqiq ifadə edin.

範例: My favourite teacher helped me improve my English skills because I was not very good at it and didn't like the subject. However, she inspired me to learn and enjoy English, which motivated me to improve.

建議: Cavabınızda fikirləriniz yaxşı ifadə olunub, amma cümlələr bir az uzun və təkrarlayıcıdır. Daha qısa və aydın cümlələr qurun, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və söz ehtiyatınızı artırmağa çalışın.

範例: Yes, I am currently an English teacher and I love my job. I enjoy working with children and helping them succeed. Therefore, I try to design innovative and motivating lessons to keep my students engaged.

× she is English teacher at my school

✓ she is an English teacher at my school

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'English teacher'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner.

× when I have when I need help, she always support me in all

✓ when I needed help, she always supported me in everything

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' and 'need' with past context. It should use past tense 'needed' and 'supported' to maintain consistency. Also, 'support' should be in past tense 'supported' to agree with past time frame.

× I don't take their, I didn't take their numbers

✓ I didn't take their numbers

The phrase 'I don't take their' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct form is 'I didn't take their numbers' to express past action. Also, 'their' is correctly used as a possessive pronoun referring to the teachers' numbers.

× I just have university teachers number

✓ I just have my university teacher's number

The phrase 'university teachers number' lacks possessive form and article. It should be 'my university teacher's number' to indicate possession and singular form.

× she inspired me learning this language and improving my skills

✓ she inspired me to learn this language and improve my skills

The verb 'inspire' is followed by the infinitive form 'to learn' rather than the gerund 'learning'. Similarly, 'improving' should be 'to improve' to maintain parallel structure.

× I like working helping the students in a positive way

✓ I like working and helping the students in a positive way

The phrase 'working helping' lacks a conjunction. Adding 'and' connects the two gerunds properly.

× I love to see the students success

✓ I love to see the students' success

The noun 'students' should be in possessive form 'students'' to indicate that the success belongs to the students.